BHAAR

by Quateel Ahmad on March 21, 2012, 06:48:18 AM
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Shabdon ki upaj, sahitya ki lalak hoon main
Soye hue jag mein dhamakk hoon main

Itihaas ka marmik chhand hoon main
Kalpana komal swachhand hoon main

Darshak aur drishya ka samavesh hoon main
Trast jeevan ka tadapta aavesh hoon main

Satya ke charitra ka chitrankan hoon main
Samaaj ki thekedaari ka laanchhan hoon main

Vichalit mann, tan bechain hoon main
Ashru, muskaan, bolte nain hoon main

Soch ka margdarshak, pehredaar hoon main
Sukh dukh ke anubhav ka satkaar hoon main

Sabhyata ka prachalan, vistaar hoon main
Kavi par kavita ka bhaar hoon main
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2012, 06:58:24 AM »
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Qaateel bhaai hindi premiyon ke liye aap ek sabak hain kuchh log mujhse swaal karte hain ki kyaa ham hindi rachnaaon ko post kar sakte hain main kahtaa hoon beshak.main aapko hriday se saadhuwaad detaa hoon aur bdhaai detaa hoon aap khush rahe aur isee tarah adab kee sewaa karte rahen
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 05:47:51 PM »
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Saini Bhai, aap ne saraaha bahut achcha laga. Main bhi aisi hi duwidha mein tha, phir socha, post karte hain...dekhenge. Dhanyawaad!!

Waise maine aap ka blog padhne ki koshish ki lekin wo aapke yoindia profile par hi laut aata hai!
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2012, 08:19:50 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi sundar bahut hi khoobsurat rachna ... padhke bahut achcha laga...  khobsurti k saath likhi hui aapki ye kavita humein bahut pasand aaayi...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 22, 2012, 12:52:42 AM »
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boht achi rachna hai yeh apki mubarak ho
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2012, 07:32:35 AM »
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Hridayji aur Saahillji pasand karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya!
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2012, 07:53:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause NICE CREATION  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2012, 01:58:08 AM »
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Bahut sundar kavita hai Qateel ji.Haardik badhai aur shubhkaamnayein.Hasan
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2012, 07:56:36 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Pankajji aur Siddiquiji !!!
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