Bin pyaar koi shayar nahi dekhaaa~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on October 04, 2010, 09:34:15 AM
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Bazm me shaamil sabhi BHANVARO'N or sabhi KALIYO'N ko "Abhi" ka adaab, namaskar, sat-sri-akal......

yaaron...husna walon par to hazar nagme, gazale or shayari bas unki tareef me hi likh diye gaye, tareef sachi bhi hui or jhutii bhi...gahe bagaaahe ham bhi usi laye me beh gaye or kuchh naye cheeze nikalkar saamne aayi..unhi me se ek aap sab ke saamne pesh hee..Alag bat ye he ki ye na to tareef he na dard ka fasana...
na poora sach hi hee na poora jhuutt..ummeed he achha lagega~


haseeno'n ke saamne to behek jati he khud sharab mere dost
bin deedaar behek gaya koi deewana nahi dekhaaaa

khuda bachaye in haseen sharo'n se nazar ke
bin toote reh gaya koi dil bechara nahi dekhaaaa

husna to adayen bikherta he ashiqo'n ko jalane ke liye
bin shamma jal gayaa koi parwanaa nahi dekhaaaa

yun to bin taron ka amber dekha he mene "Abhi"
bin pyaar ban gaya koi shayar nahi dekhaaaa

kahaniyan ishq ki kai huyi shuru or khatm huyi isi bazm me akar
bin kagaz ban gaya koi afsanaaa nahi dekhaaaa



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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2010, 09:50:09 AM »
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Bazm me shaamil sabhi BHANVARO'N or sabhi KALIYO'N ko "Abhi" ka adaab, namaskar, sat-sri-akal......

yaaron...husna walon par to hazar nagme, gazale or shayari bas unki tareef me hi likh diye gaye, tareef sachi bhi hui or jhutii bhi...gahe bagaaahe ham bhi usi laye me beh gaye or kuchh naye cheeze nikalkar saamne aayi..unhi me se ek aap sab ke saamne pesh hee..Alag bat ye he ki ye na to tareef he na dard ka fasana...
na poora sach hi hee na poora jhuutt..ummeed he achha lagega~


haseeno'n ke saamne to behek jati he khud sharab mere dost
bin deedaar behek gaya koi deewana nahi dekhaaaa

khuda bachaye in haseen sharo'n se nazar ke
bin toote reh gaya koi dil bechara nahi dekhaaaa

husna to adayen bikherta he ashiqo'n ko jalane ke liye
bin shamma jal gayaa koi parwanaa nahi dekhaaaa

yun to bin taron ka amber dekha he mene "Abhi"
bin pyaar ban gaya koi shayar nahi dekhaaaa

kahaniyan ishq ki kai huyi shuru or khatm huyi isi bazm me akar
bin kagaz ban gaya koi afsanaaa nahi dekhaaaa





Bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..Shaandar Peshkash!!!

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Dekha Hai Waise To maine Kayi Diljalo Ko,
Par Shama Ki Khaatir Jo Khud Jal jaaye
Aisa Parwaana Nahi Dekha...

Ishq Ki Lagi kabhi Naa Kabhi To Mit Hi Jaayegi
Par Kisi Ke Khaatir Mar-Mitne Wala Deewana nahi Dekha...

Ishq Hai To Hai!!! Kyon Chupaye Yeh Raaz Hum Sabse
Uske Likhe Geet par Duniya Marti hai,
kabhi Kisi Ne unn Geeto Ka Gungunana Nahi dekha

Yuh To Humne Bhi Shayar Ke Bes mein Kahanikaar Dekhe Hai!
"Khwaish" Par Kisi Ke gham Par Khud Ro Dena!!!
Aur kisi Ki khushi Par Muskurana Nahi dekha....
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2010, 10:27:05 AM »
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waah kya baat hai abhi ji..
khoobsurat khayalo ki khoobsurat adayegi..
bagut khoob..
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2010, 10:28:43 AM »
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kya bat he khwaish bhaaiii bahut khoob likha he apne bhi~ bas panktiyon ki length par thodasa dhyan dijiye~

pasand karne ka shukriya~
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2010, 10:29:31 AM »
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waah kya baat hai abhi ji..
khoobsurat khayalo ki khoobsurat adayegi..
bagut khoob..

shukriya manzil sahab ...sab padhne walon ki nazaron ki inaayat he ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 02:09:55 PM »
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Oye hoye kya baat hai Abhi jee..Maza agaya..pehla shaer hi dil choo gaya..bahaut bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2010, 02:11:19 PM »
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Khwaish Dost bahaut bahaut khoob..Maza aya parr kar.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 07:06:14 AM »
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rahimm bhaiiii shukriya ...bole to dil chhoone diya apne ...warna sone ka dil bahut kam chhoone milta he~
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 07:22:47 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABHITAMRAKAR JI.....

BIN PYAR KOI SHAYAR NAHI DEKHA
NASHA SHARAB ME NAHI JO SHABAB ME DEKHA....
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 07:47:16 AM »
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bahut babut shukriya apka CARA jiii..

khoob kah apne bhi~
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 09:34:36 AM »
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Waah Sirji... ek dum zabardast likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2010, 10:22:17 AM »
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shukriya kapil jiii...aji ek darkhwast he sirg na kahooo...me itna bada hun hi nahi ki eisa kuchh kaha jaye~
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 10:25:10 AM »
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Srji umar ka soch k nahi.. dil kiya to aapse bol diya.. aap nahi chaahte to nahi kahenge agar aapko bura laga ho to...
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2010, 10:58:53 AM »
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areee nhai kapil jii bura nahi laga bas sirg thoda paraya sa laga...or apne paraye shabd se bulaye to ajeeb lagta he na sir~
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2010, 01:28:14 PM »
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ab nahi kahenge Abhi ji... khud hi apna bolte ho aur khud hi "sir" bolke parya karte ho.. ye aadaat aapki achchi nahi Abhi ji... Usual Smile
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