Chah ko chahiye aik hi asar hone tak.....Abulasad

by Abul Asad on January 11, 2013, 12:06:40 PM
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Ye Mirza Ghalib ka mashoor kalaam "aah ko chahiye aik umr asr hone tak"
se inspire hokar likhi gayi hai, mera koi muqhabla nahin Ustad Ghalib se
magar musalsal koshish hai ke kuch unjaise purasrar ashar likhon...
ye meri koshish ahle-bazm ki zer-e nazr.

 Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazr asr hone tak

Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazar asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri palkhen uthne tak

Meri aahen aatish aur sanse bekhaboo
Dil ko kaise behlaon tera jalwa hone tak
 

Josh jaatae hain mere tere aane tak
Phir hosh nahin aata tere jaane tak
 

Teghen tez hoti hain zamane ki ‘Abul’
Kaat-ti hain sa’anse teri  nazar milne tak
Abul Asad
 


Meanings of difficult words
 
Chah : like, liking
Chahiye: wanting, needed
Palken: eyelids
Aahen: Sighs, deep sighs
Jalwa: sight of a face
Josh: passions, zeal, lust, enthusiasm
Hosh: life, breath
Tegh: sword, dagger, knife
Tez: sharp, sharpen
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2013, 04:01:54 PM »
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Very nice and kaabeile taareef..
Akhir ashaar thora kamzor nazar aaya, baaki sabhi la-jaawaab hain.
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2013, 07:18:32 PM »
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Very nice and kaabeile taareef..
Akhir ashaar thora kamzor nazar aaya, baaki sabhi la-jaawaab hain.



Shukriya sir,

Aapki baat bilkul durust hai,
aakhri ashar waqaye thoda sa beemar hai
aajkal sardi ka mausam hai, thand si lag gayi hai ussey.
Magar baat aapki wazey hai.
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 02:00:00 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 02:28:13 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 02:49:24 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 11, 2013, 12:06:40 PM
Ye Mirza Ghalib ka mashoor kalaam "aah ko chahiye aik umr asr hone tak"
se inspire hokar likhi gayi hai, mera koi muqhabla nahin Ustad Ghalib se
magar musalsal koshish hai ke kuch unjaise purasrar ashar likhon...
ye meri koshish ahle-bazm ki zer-e nazr.

 Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazr asr hone tak

Chah ko chahiye aik hi nazar asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri palkhen uthne tak

Meri aahen aatish aur sanse bekhaboo
Dil ko kaise behlaon tera jalwa hone tak
 

Josh jaatae hain mere tere aane tak
Phir hosh nahin aata tere jaane tak
 

Teghen tez hoti hain zamane ki ‘Abul’
Kaat-ti hain sa’anse teri  nazar milne tak
Abul Asad
 


Meanings of difficult words
 
Chah : like, liking
Chahiye: wanting, needed
Palken: eyelids
Aahen: Sighs, deep sighs
Jalwa: sight of a face
Josh: passions, zeal, lust, enthusiasm
Hosh: life, breath
Tegh: sword, dagger, knife
Tez: sharp, sharpen

abulasad sb aapki koshish ke liye mubarakbaad,

lekin aapne to poora misra hi badal kar rakh diya wo misra hai.

aah ko chahiye ek umr asar hone tak.



aur qafia hai asar nazar,sar, khabar.


jo shayad aapne dhayan hi nahi diya. ghazal men teen chizoN ka dhiyan rakhe behr rawani aur radeef , qafia ..
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very nice
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Quote from: prashad on January 12, 2013, 02:28:13 AM
very nice
Prashad ji shukriya
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abulasad sb aapki koshish ke liye mubarakbaad,

lekin aapne to poora misra hi badal kar rakh diya wo misra hai.

aah ko chahiye ek umr asar hone tak.



aur qafia hai asar nazar,sar, khabar.


jo shayad aapne dhayan hi nahi diya. ghazal men teen chizoN ka dhiyan rakhe behr rawani aur radeef , qafia ..





Aarish ji,

Sabse pehle aapka shukriya ke itna waqt nikal kar
aapne ye adna kalam par zer e nazr ki.
Ji mujhe Ghalib sahab ka original misra bakhoobi yaad hai
gar aap dekhenge mere kalaam ki ibtedai write-up men to yeh
maujood hai. Main ne ussi se inspire hokar isse likha hai.

Gar aap isse apne aapme aik nai kalaam ki raushini men dekhenge
to aapko shayed thoda farq mehsoos hoga.Ghalib sahab ke misron ke Kaafiya aur they, mere kaafiye aur hain.
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bahut bahut khoob
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bahut bahut khoob

Aqsh saheb
Shukriya bahut aapka
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