Deewan_E_Aalam

by Deewan_E_Aalam on October 24, 2004, 05:47:22 AM
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Deewan_E_Aalam
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Greetings to all. This is my first post in this forum.

Sirf door se hi kyaa nikhaar rahe ho dusron ko
Kabhi paas bhi aao jaaneman
Ki hum bataayen ki tum kyaa chiz ho !


Thank you.
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2004, 10:24:18 PM »
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Nice deewan_e_aalam!!!!

Husan ko bulaty ho, kaya deewane lagty ho
yah wo shama hai jis per parwane
 khud chal kar jaya karty hai.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2004, 02:53:24 AM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Nice deewan_e_aalam!!!!

Husan ko bulaty ho, kaya deewane lagty ho
yah wo shama hai jis per parwane
 khud chal kar jaya karty hai.....


Pooja ji isey aisey likho -

husn ko bulaathey ho
ajab deewaaney ho
yei vo parwaaney hein
shamaa khhudh jaaye jinkey paas

(sorry if you mind it)
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