JAWAAB

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JAWAAB

Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan,
Baat hai sirf gardash-e-zamaanaa kee…
Wagarnaa hum se thaa ijtinaab kahan,
Keh gaaye hain khwaab mein aayen gey,
Neend hee nahin to phir khwaab kahan,
Aap khud hee jawaab ho apnaa MohanN,
Aur phir iss kaa yahan jawaab hai kahan!!

Ijtinaab = keeping aloof;  avoiding; abstinence;

Surindar. N                    "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2015, 08:51:53 AM »
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WHO BAAT KAHAN

Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan,
Baat hai sirf gardash-e-zamaanaa kee…
Wagarnaa hum se thaa ijtinaab kahan,
Keh gaaye hain khwaab mein aayen gey,
Neend hee nahin to phir khwaab kahan,
Aap khud hee jawaab ho apnaa MohanN,
Aur phir iss kaa yahan jawaab hai kahan!!

Ijtinaab = keeping aloof;  avoiding; abstinence;

Surindar. N                    "MohanN"



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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2015, 02:17:00 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2015, 03:19:25 PM »
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waah waah waah waah , bahut khoob Surindar ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2015, 01:52:11 AM »
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Bahut sundar
bahut shukria Srishti Raj jee.
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2015, 04:03:35 AM »
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Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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ek rau aur ek sawaal pesh hai
kya agar yehi lines mahtaab aapko dekh ke bolta ho...
Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2015, 05:58:24 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2015, 01:40:17 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2015, 01:42:46 AM »
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waah waah waah waah , bahut khoob Surindar ji....!!!

bahut shukria Hriday Sahib.
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2015, 01:56:49 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2015, 01:57:41 AM »
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waah waah waah waah , bahut khoob Surindar ji....!!!

bahut shukria Hriday Sahib.
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2015, 02:06:18 AM »
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Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan,

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ek rau aur ek sawaal pesh hai
kya agar yehi lines mahtaab aapko dekh ke bolta ho...
Sahib hum kahan, woh mahtaab kahan,
Zindgi humaarii itnee kaamyaab kahan
bahut shukria Alfaaz Sahib daad aur Rau ke liye. You have asked me a very tedious question yet it is simple. Only women's beauty can be compared to Mehtaab or aaftaab etc. May be man's handsomeness can be compared to something rugged yet handsome like a mountain that always stays in one place.
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2015, 03:43:36 AM »
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mohan ji,
sat sri akal
poetry, like life, is a matter of interpretation. If you perceive moon vis-a-vis beauty it becomes all feminine. However, i have interpreted mahtaab and kamyaab as brilliance and its resultant success both variants being unisexual.
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