KHUDA RAA (4-Liner)... "mohaN"

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KHUDA RAA

Khuda.raa aaj phir teraa jalwaa dekhtaa reh gayaa...
Ek hosin mujasmaa dekhaa bas dekhtaa hee reh gayaa...
Kahin tu yeh naa keh de ke yeh MohaN kaisaa shayar hai...
Aur to kuchh naa soojhaa waah waah hee kehtaa reh gayaa!

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Bahut khoob Surinder saa, aapke 4 liners are best.
Short and sweet.

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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2017, 12:01:34 AM »
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Bahut khoob Surinder saa, aapke 4 liners are best.
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KHUDA RAA

Khuda.raa aaj phir teraa jalwaa dekhtaa reh gayaa...
Ek hosin mujasmaa dekhaa bas dekhtaa hee reh gayaa...
Kahin tu yeh naa keh de ke yeh MohaN kaisaa shayar hai...
Aur to kuchh naa soojhaa waah waah hee kehtaa reh gayaa!

Surindar. N                               "MohaN"

Bahut shkria all readers. notworthy notworthy notworthy
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