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<>*Meri Pehchan*<> Ye shokiyan ye shaitaniyan
Meri athkheliyan ye naadaniyan
Dekhkar tum na dil ko gawana
mera jaadu kar dega tumko deewana...!!
mere chanchal shararti naina
inki baton me tum na aana
ye bante hain bhole bhaale
par chura lenge tera sukh chaina...!!
meri julfen badi matwali
lehrake tumko pagal kar dengi
inse bachke rehna tum jaan
ye tumko apna bana lengi...!!
jharne si meri hasi aur ye muskaan
sabse alag hai meri pehchaan
main masti bhari mastani pawan
***AnAMIkA*** hun main jaan…..!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2010, 08:17:00 AM » |
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hahhahah......thnx khwaish ji k aapne ise pasand kiya....bas khudki kuch tareef karne ka man hamara bhi ho gaya aur likh gaye khud par kuch lines.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2010, 11:07:21 AM » |
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Wah! kamaal ka likha hai aap ne AnAmikA Ji
Aisi shok aur mast adayein ghayal kar deti hain
Agar sambhal na payein to diwaana bana deti hain
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Abhi Tamrakar
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2010, 11:17:24 AM » |
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wah anu ji wah mast post he...aapne is forum par invite kiya bada achha laga~
kuchh meri tarah se~
geet gazal nazma ki barsat kiya karte the kabhi
us har boond ka saaz sirf tum hi the
meri pehchaan mere shabdo se thi 'Abhi'
jinka agaaz or ant sirf tum hi the~
ITna achha or badhiya mahaul he sab ek se badhkar ek par ek bat jo is forum ke bare me kahuga ...ADMIN sahab ya to regular update nahi karte ya visit hi nahi karte...Sorry ADMIN sahab par mujhe kehena pad raha he...
I have requested registration about 10 days from today and still it is awaited. mere khyal se ADMIN sahab mujhe approve karne me interested nahi he~~
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2010, 11:22:37 AM » |
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Sorry For being offtopic Anamika Ji.. Par
Abhi Ji Register karne ke liye admin ki zaroorat kyon,aap khud Register nahi kar paa rahe ho Kya??
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Abhi Tamrakar
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2010, 11:27:27 AM » |
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aji register to me pehle din hi kar chuka tha .. par approval ADMIN ji ko karna he na!! jo ab tak awaiting dikha raha he~ It needs ADMIN APPORVAL to SIGN IN TO THE FORUM..or agar koi or tarika ho to bhi bataye~
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2010, 03:24:24 PM » |
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<>*Meri Pehchan*<> Ye shokiyan ye shaitaniyan
Meri athkheliyan ye naadaniyan
Dekhkar tum na dil ko gawana
mera jaadu kar dega tumko deewana...!!
mere chanchal shararti naina
inki baton me tum na aana
ye bante hain bhole bhaale
par chura lenge tera sukh chaina...!!
meri julfen badi matwali
lehrake tumko pagal kar dengi
inse bachke rehna tum jaan
ye tumko apna bana lengi...!!
jharne si meri hasi aur ye muskaan
sabse alag hai meri pehchaan
main masti bhari mastani pawan
***AnAMIkA*** hun main jaan…..!!!!
Very Nice Poetry ......Kasak Ji ! Excellent work ! |
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2010, 05:10:52 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2010, 06:00:09 AM » |
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Nice Anamika ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2010, 06:01:19 AM » |
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acha hua aap ne bata diya kasak jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii waise mai to dar raha tha aap se ab nahi darunga pakka  eheheh  acha likha hai apne baare me |
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2010, 12:39:12 PM » |
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Kamaal ki kavita likhi hai Kasak ji. Ek naya pahlu ek naye andaaz ke saath. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2010, 07:24:51 AM » |
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Kamaal ki kavita likhi hai Kasak ji. Ek naya pahlu ek naye andaaz ke saath. Daad hazir hai.
shukriya riyaz ji pasand farmane k liye.. |
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2010, 07:48:01 AM » |
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Nice Anamika ji...!!!
Very Nice Poetry ......Kasak Ji ! Excellent work !
Wah! kamaal ka likha hai aap ne AnAmikA Ji
Aisi shok aur mast adayein ghayal kar deti hain
Agar sambhal na payein to diwaana bana deti hain
aap sabka shukriya jo aapne ise pasand kiya hai... apke comments ek himmat dete hain kuch aur likhne ki yunhi sath dete rahiye..... |
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2010, 04:53:46 AM » |
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acha hua aap ne bata diya kasak jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii waise mai to dar raha tha aap se ab nahi darunga pakka eheheh acha likha hai apne baare me thnx rahul k tumne ise pasand kiya aur haan tum ho kahan reeeee |
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