narm palko ke saye mein..!!

by thelostworld on May 10, 2005, 05:48:56 PM
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Narm palko ke saye mein chupa le tumko..
ji karta hai is jahan se chura le tumko..
hai khauf ki reh na jaye tanha saasen..
Bachi sanso ki khushboo mein basa le tumko..
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2005, 05:50:39 PM »
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Bahut acche Lostworld........................................ ........... :lol:
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2005, 06:05:46 PM »
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thanx dhadakn!!!

chand ke baad sitaro ki tarf kya dekhu..
tujko dekha to hajaro ki taraf kya dekhu..
pyaar ke naam par haske hamke marjana hai..
dubna hai toe kinaro ki tarf kya dekhu!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2005, 12:22:25 PM »
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thanx dhadakn!!!

chand ke baad sitaro ki tarf kya dekhu..
tujko dekha to hajaro ki taraf kya dekhu..
pyaar ke naam par haske hamke marjana hai..
dubna hai toe kinaro ki tarf kya dekhu!!!
wah lostworld,both r nice.
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2005, 10:05:42 PM »
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thanx dhadakn!!!

chand ke baad sitaro ki tarf kya dekhu..
tujko dekha to hajaro ki taraf kya dekhu..
pyaar ke naam par haske hamke marjana hai..
dubna hai toe kinaro ki tarf kya dekhu!!!
wah lostworld,both r nice.


bahot  acche  thelostworld..................
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2005, 10:58:00 PM »
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Very Nice all!!! Bahut achchhe!!!sabhi ne bahut khoob likha hai!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2005, 08:26:30 PM »
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Narm palko ke saye mein chupa le tumko..
ji karta hai is jahan se chura le tumko..
hai khauf ki reh na jaye tanha saasen..
Bachi sanso ki khushboo mein basa le tumko..


bahut ke mast andaz hai aap ka the lost world
...
in aakhon main tasveer bana ke basa le tumko
na ho saanme to bhi har pal dekhe tumko
khauf na rahi koi dil main aise basa le tumko
doli main bathake dunya se bhaga le tumko
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2005, 09:55:57 PM »
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Narm palko ke saye mein chupa le tumko..
ji karta hai is jahan se chura le tumko..
hai khauf ki reh na jaye tanha saasen..
Bachi sanso ki khushboo mein basa le tumko..


bahut ke mast andaz hai aap ka the lost world
...
in aakhon main tasveer bana ke basa le tumko
na ho saanme to bhi har pal dekhe tumko
khauf na rahi koi dil main aise basa le tumko
doli main bathake dunya se bhaga le tumko


Beautiful!!! Waaah Kya baat hai Tosha ji!!!Bahut achchhe! :D  :D
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2005, 12:17:43 PM »
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thank u ji ...Sharma ji
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khuli aakho se bhi dekhte hai tumko
chera hai tumhara ya nashe ke puriya
saaso main mahesus karte hai tumko
ada hai kaise ki ahesas ban gaye ho tumto
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2005, 08:42:28 AM »
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thank you ji ...Sharma ji
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khuli aakho se bhi dekhte hai tumko
chera hai tumhara ya nashe ke puriya
saaso main mahesus karte hai tumko
ada hai kaise ki ahesas ban gaye ho tumto


wowow!! Kya baat hai!!! Bahut achchha likh rahi hain aap tosha ji!!! waah!

Humaare dil ki haalat gesu-e-mehboob jaane hai!
Pareshaan ki Pareshaani , Pareshaan Khoob jaane hai!




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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2005, 08:56:01 AM »
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Is hasrat se mila kya mujhko
Ik jhalak mere dildaar ki
Is muhabbat se mila kya mujhko
Bechaini-o-beqarari yaar ki,
Is ashiqui se mila kya mujhko
Ik sunahari raah ishq ki,
Aur tere pyaar se mila kya mujhko
Ik raah jeene ki hamvaar si
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2005, 02:45:23 PM »
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wah fakharnaveed ji!!! Nice lines!!! :D Bahut achchhe!!!!!
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