shireen -adaaa unkii.............. ( K _A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 21, 2012, 06:30:38 PM
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                      saaarii  haseeeeeeeeeena.o   ke   nazar
      


                 itraa kar rukhsaar se zulf hataaney ki wo adaa ke mat pooch.!
                 sharmaa  kar  narzein  jhukaaney ki  wo  adaa  ke mat pooch.!!


                hain    jalwey   maujood  kai   rudaad-e-husn   mein   lekin.!
                chilman mein chehraa chupaaney ki  wo  adaa  ke  mat  pooch .!


                girr    padaa    paimaana    jo    dast -e-saaqi    se    aaj.!
                dekh  chaal mein bal khaaney ki wo   adaa   ke  mat   pooch.!


                lagey  larazney  noor-e-kahkasha.n  bhi  aasmaan  pey  ye dekh.!
                chaandni mein unkey muskuraaney  ki wo adaa ke mat pooch.!


                maan   lii    haar  apnii,  shamsheer-e-raqeeb  ney  bhi  unsey.!
                dekh,  jhalakti  aankho.n se ghurraney  ki wo adaa ke mat pooch.!


                chhooaa   jo   dast  se    apne,  to  huaa  be-haal  dariyaa  bhii.!
               aayii nazar maujo.n mein lahraaney ki wo adaa  ke  mat   pooch.!


                diyaa   hogaa    DOA   zaahido.n   ney   HAWAA   ko    uss    waqt.!
                khultey  huey   naqaab  ko sambhaalney  kii wo adaa ke mat pooch.!


               rahaa  khamosh  main,  per  zamaanaa  ye  kahtaa  rahaa  her  waqt.!
               lutt gayii mehfil, dekh, uskey aaney kii wo adaa ke mat pooch.!!
                
 

                
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2012, 07:20:06 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab... kia khoob adaaoN ko jalwa afzor kiya
hai... aik se badhkar aik adaa rahi har ashaar ki... behad
khoob...

Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN radiff O kafiye ka bhi khayaal rakha kijiye kalaam
meiN jaaN kafiye se hi aati hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2012, 07:26:24 PM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!

bahut khoob janab... kia khoob adaaoN ko jalwa afzor kiya
hai... aik se badhkar aik adaa rahi har ashaar ki... behad
khoob...

Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN radiff O kafiye ka bhi khayaal rakha kijiye kalaam
meiN jaaN kafiye se hi aati hai... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 




thanx parwaaz sb. mainne ek kafia 'adaa' pe  ye kalaam      likha hai Usual Smile Usual Smile
 
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2012, 07:33:18 PM »
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thanx parwaaz sb. mainne ek kafia 'adaa' pe  ye kalaam      likha hai Usual Smile Usual Smile
 

K A Jee Aadaab!

janab Aapne aik se badhkar aik kalaam kahi hai aur kisi
meiN koi khami nazar nahi aayi hume... Par aapke is jawab
se hume aapko yeH link deni padh rahi hai...

Kuch tafseel haiN is link meiN radiff kafiyaa aur shayri se
releted... Usual Smile

Ummid hai aapko humari is link se faydaa mileNga.. Usual Smile
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 12:53:30 AM »
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bahut umda khamoshji, dhero dad, id kaise rahee
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 01:21:25 AM »
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bahut khoob khamosh ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 02:24:41 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khamosh jee

Kalaam bahut accha hai..dhero Daad


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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 05:11:32 AM »
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K A Jee Aadaab!

janab Aapne aik se badhkar aik kalaam kahi hai aur kisi
meiN koi khami nazar nahi aayi hume... Par aapke is jawab
se hume aapko yeH link deni padh rahi hai...

Kuch tafseel haiN is link meiN radiff kafiyaa aur shayri se
releted... Usual Smile

Ummid hai aapko humari is link se faydaa mileNga.. Usual Smile
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



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parwaaz sahab shukria . main ismein rectification kar deta hoon . mazeed further discussion ke.
   haan main apne kalaam mein kafia aur radeef ka ehtemaam karney kii hamesha koshish karta hoon. shayad aapney dekha ho. per iss mein main ney uss tarah nahin likha jaisa poem ki requirement hai. mafii chahata hoon .
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 06:32:36 AM »
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Nice!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 07:23:18 AM »
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boht khub ka ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 08:51:05 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2012, 04:23:05 PM »
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bahut umda khamoshji, dhero dad, id kaise rahee

thanx. achi guzri
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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2012, 06:05:09 PM »
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kya baat hai khamosh ji.dil nikaal kar rakh diya aap ne.
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2012, 02:15:29 PM »
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bahut khoob khamosh ji

THANX
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2012, 03:53:13 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khamosh jee

Kalaam bahut accha hai..dhero Daad




thanx
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