Suna hai chand bhi takta hai ussay falak se

by ParwaaZ on August 04, 2010, 08:44:41 PM
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Suna hai Chand bhi takta hai ussay falak se
Suna hai sitare chup jate hai uski chamak se

Suna hai uske mahakaar ka aisa asar hai
Suna hai Gul bhi mahakte hai uski mahak se

Suna hai uski gali me dhadkane sunai deti hai
Suna hai dil zoro se dhadakte hai uski chhak se

Suna hai aashqui mijaaz rakhane wale log
Rah mud ke dekte hai uski chudiyo ki khanak se

Suna hai uske husn ka charcha hai har suu
Suna hai zaif bhi ankhbhar ke dekhte hai ainak se

Suna hai andhere bhi ussay ParwaaZ karte hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2010, 09:45:51 PM »
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Wah wah Parwaaz ji,bahut khoob,great creation. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 08:48:06 AM »
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Wah Parwaaz ji wah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 11:46:11 AM »
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Thank you Madhuvash Jii.......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 12:16:22 PM »
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bht khubb parwaz ji......

suna to humne bhi hai k ek aisa shaks hai yahan
par na ajne kyun aaj tak wo nazar k saamne nahin aaya.....
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2010, 01:25:45 PM »
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Bahut hi pyaare aur bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz me pesh kiye ....aapke sabhi ehsaas mujhe behad pasand aaye.... Parwaaz Sahab ! bahut hi maasoomiyat nazar aai ... har ashaar me ...dil ko chhoo baithe... ! bahut khoob ...tahe dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi aur behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen.....aage bhi....

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2010, 01:30:25 PM »
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bahut khoob parwaz ji..
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 09:44:31 PM »
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Thank You Klaskar Jee....... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 09:48:40 PM »
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bht khubb parwaz ji......

suna to humne bhi hai k ek aisa shaks hai yahan
par na ajne kyun aaj tak wo nazar k saamne nahin aaya.....


Thank You Kasak Jee for nice compliment... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 09:59:30 PM »
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Bahut hi pyaare aur bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz me pesh kiye ....aapke sabhi ehsaas mujhe behad pasand aaye.... Parwaaz Sahab ! bahut hi maasoomiyat nazar aai ... har ashaar me ...dil ko chhoo baithe... ! bahut khoob ...tahe dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi aur behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen.....aage bhi....

duaaon ke saath...


Naresh Jee Aadaab!

Aapki tareef wa hounsal afzai ke tahe dil se mamnoon hai.....
Jee koshish jari hai...... Likhate rahte hai,

Jee jis gazal se mutasir hua the Ahemad Faraz Sahab ki usi per yeh tukbandi kar dii thi...

Woh aap se share karte hai..... Behad azeez gazal hai humari... Usual Smile Aapne kayiN baar suni hogi...

Waise to yeh Gazal bahut badi hai hum iske kuch ashaar pesh kar rahe hai.....



सुना है लोग उसे आँख भर के देखते हैं!
सो उसके शहर में कुछ दिन ठहर के देखते है!

सुना है उसको भी है शेर ओ शायरी से शगफ़
सो हम भी मोजीज़े अपने हुनर के देखते है!

सुना है बोले तो बातों से फूल झरते है
ये बात है तो चलो बात कर के देखते है!

सुना है रात उसे चाँद तकता रहता है
सितारे बम ए फलक से उतर के देखते है!

सुना है दिन को उसे तितलियाँ सताती है
सुना है रात को जुगनू ठहर के देखते है!

सुना है उसके बदन की तराश ऐसी है
के फूल अपनी किबाए कतर के देखते है!

बस एक निगा से लूटा है काफिला दिल का
सो परवान तमन्ना भी दर के देखते है!

कहानिया ही सहीं सब मुबलघे ही सहीं
अगर वो खवाब है तबीर कर के देखते है!

अब उसके शहर में ठहर के कुछ कर जाएँ
फ़राज़ आओ सितारे सफ़र के देखते है!         
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2010, 09:00:39 PM »
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Thanks for appriciate... brokenbylove jee...
bahut khoob parwaz ji..
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 08:14:17 PM »
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Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Parwaz Ji Mashallah,.

Jab Pardh Raha tgha Mujeh Sir Ahmed Faraz Ji Ki Wo Ghazal Yaad Aa Gayi,.
Jo Meri Fav8 Hai

Sunaa Hai Log use Aankh Bharke Dekhte Hai,.

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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 09:10:42 PM »
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Azeem Sahab Aapki mohobbatoN ka bahut bahut shukriyaa Janab...... Dil mutmain hota hai, jab koi dil se pasand karta hai....

Jee Aapne sahiN farmayaa humne yeh kalaam Faraz Sahab ki gazal se mutasir hokar hi likhi hai aur unki wohi gazal humne apne last post meiN hindi meiN post kii shayad aapko Hindi nahi aati.... Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa janab..

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2010, 09:15:43 PM »
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parwaz ji bahut khoob suna hai aapne.bahut khoobsurat peshkash. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 02:07:46 AM »
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Suna hai Chand bhi takta hai ussay falak se
Suna hai sitare chup jate hai uski chamak se

Suna hai uske mahakaar ka aisa asar hai
Suna hai Gul bhi mahakte hai uski mahak se

Suna hai uski gali me dhadkane sunai deti hai
Suna hai dil zoro se dhadakte hai uski chhak se

Suna hai aashqui mijaaz rakhane wale log
Rah mud ke dekte hai uski chudiyo ki khanak se

Suna hai uske husn ka charcha hai har suu
Suna hai zaif bhi ankhbhar ke dekhte hai ainak se

Suna hai andhere bhi ussay ParwaaZ karte hai
Suna hai mehfile roshan ho jati hai uski subak se

Suna pasine chhuth jate hai pahelwano ke bhi
Suna hai waliden bhi ghabra jate hai uski karak se   



Bahut khoob Parwaaz Ji
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