TUM

by aryasudhanshu on July 02, 2007, 09:02:03 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 855 times)
aryasudhanshu
Guest
Reply with quote
Tareef karoon 'gar main tumhari
Sochta hun andaaz-e-bayaan kya hoga
Ghazalen sunaoon auron ki kalam se
Par unme aakhir naya kya hoga!

Tohfa doon 'gar main tumhe
Nakaafi gul-e-gulaab hoga
Firr sochta hun jaan saunp doon tumhe
Bhala isse nayaab aur kya hoga!

Samet loon agar tumhe ek lafz me
Chhota jaan-e-wafa hoga
Kamzori nahi ho tum meri
Par iss taakat ka naam naya hoga!

Dekhoon 'gar main tumhari nazron me
Ajab saa haal mera hoga
May ki zaroorat nahi aainda
Usme nasha hi kya hoga!

Chhoo loon 'gar main tumhe
Bada kaanpta sa haath mera hoga
Kaanch ki bani si tum
Toot gayin to mera kya hoga!
Logged
Sahiba Zehra
Guest
TUM
«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2007, 05:49:02 PM »
Reply with quote
wah wah
mujhe nahin pata aur logon abhi tak isko notice kyun nahin kiya
apne bohot acha likha hai
Logged
aryasudhanshu
Guest
TUM
«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2007, 07:25:56 PM »
Reply with quote
Thank you ji... ummeed hai auron ko bhi ye achchi hi lagegi...
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2007, 11:51:58 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "aryasudhanshu"
Tareef karoon 'gar main tumhari
Sochta hun andaaz-e-bayaan kya hoga
Ghazalen sunaoon auron ki kalam se
Par unme aakhir naya kya hoga!

Tohfa doon 'gar main tumhe
Nakaafi gul-e-gulaab hoga
Firr sochta hun jaan saunp doon tumhe
Bhala isse nayaab aur kya hoga!

Samet loon agar tumhe ek lafz me
Chhota jaan-e-wafa hoga
Kamzori nahi ho tum meri
Par iss taakat ka naam naya hoga!

Dekhoon 'gar main tumhari nazron me
Ajab saa haal mera hoga
May ki zaroorat nahi aainda
Usme nasha hi kya hoga!

Chhoo loon 'gar main tumhe
Bada kaanpta sa haath mera hoga
Kaanch ki bani si tum
Toot gayin to mera kya hoga!


haan Humne b notice nahi ki ... sorry ..
Aapne bahut khubsurat andaz se shabdon ko firoya hai...
Bahut khoob. Keep up.[/color]
Logged
aryasudhanshu
Guest
TUM
«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2007, 04:40:33 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya Roja ji
Logged
monali
Guest
TUM
«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2007, 02:40:22 PM »
Reply with quote
Awesome Arya G aapne bahut achha likha hai, keep writing.
God bless you
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayari -e- Husn > Topic: TUM
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
May 06, 2024, 01:20:34 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Jaan Pe Jaan Ko
by Iqtedar
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]
Firaaq - A deadly love ta...
by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]
Sab thik hain? -Charan
by Charanjeet_Kaur
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]
Mutthi
by vivekpohre
[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]
BEDARD - (A Romantic Thri...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]
Anjaan - A THRILL LOVE TA...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]
Mar gaye Dil- e - Nadaan
by Abul Asad
[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
जंगल में शबरी के (C-SET)
by MANOJ6568
[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.097 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8499 Real Poets and poetry admirer