woh bahut khoobsurat hai

by spandana on March 09, 2010, 05:33:38 PM
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Jinki aankhon mein kudrat hai
Jinki baahon mein jannat hai
Jinki palkon par oos ki boondein chamakti hai
Jinki deedar ki chahat mein yeh duniya tarasti hai
Jinka zulfo ki raangat sa toh yeh raat hai kaali
Jinka hooton ki raangat sa toh phoolon par hai laali
badi mudat sa banai gaye woh khuda ki murat hai
mera dil mein agar dekho har taraf uski hee surat hai
mera kaha agar maano woh bahut khoobsurat hai ...
woh bahut khoobsurat hai .......
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2010, 06:10:19 PM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Spandana ji. Bahut achhi poem likhi hai. Keep it up.Bahut khoobsurat lagi ye creation.
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«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2010, 09:55:46 PM »
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WAAH JI WAAH SACH MUCH KHOOBSURAT HAIN. Applause Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2010, 08:23:02 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      SPANDANA JI.....

JINKI HAR ADAA MEIN MASTI HAI
JINKE LIYE DUNIYA TARASTI HAI
JINKE HUSN MEIN HAI JADHOO
JINKO DEKH LOG HOJATE HAI BEKABHU
WOH HASSEN EK MURAT HAI
WOH BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAI....
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2010, 08:33:09 AM »
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Bahut khoob Spandana and Caraji
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2010, 06:20:40 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ka
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2010, 08:18:38 PM »
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Bahut khoob... !!! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2010, 08:59:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2010, 04:56:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Spananda ji,great and lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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