Yah tumhaaraa roop

by abdbundeli on February 06, 2009, 04:44:15 PM
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Yah tumhaaraa roop:
Jyoun baadal baras kar thak gaye hon;
Aur,
Din key paarshwa* mein,
Dhul,
Umag aayee ho,
Sahaj hee soumya#,
Ujlee dhoop:
Kitnaa bhawanaa,
Manbhaawnaa hai!!

*Pahloo
# Full of lovely simplicity & beauty.

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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2009, 05:31:01 PM »
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nice lines... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2009, 05:33:20 PM »
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BOay Hi Achche, Abd Bhaiya, Nice One,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2009, 06:36:39 PM »
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nice lines... aapka poetic structure bahot different hai...
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2009, 08:25:32 PM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on February 06, 2009, 05:31:01 PM
nice lines... Applause
Thanks a lot!
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 06, 2009, 05:33:20 PM
BOay Hi Achche, Abd Bhaiya, Nice One,.
Thanks a lot Jaanasheen  bhaayi!
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2009, 08:32:50 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on February 06, 2009, 06:36:39 PM
nice lines... aapka poetic structure bahot different hai...
Thanks! Yah 'chhand mukt kavitaa' (yaani, a poem that is free from the bnds of metre) hai, but with fluency!
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