DOHEY AAJ KAL K SMAJ K

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on November 02, 2010, 01:25:27 PM
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Riswat ka bazar garam hai,eesay bacha n koy
Eesay koi bach gaya to vah deenbandhu sun hoi
 
Bharshtachar k karan ho raha desh ka vikas
Agar bharshtachar mit gaya to kaise hoga vikas

Nar v naree smaan hay diya savidhan n adhikar
phir bhi naree ka shoshan ho reha kya batayegi sarkar

Neta v afsar doe khade kiskay lagoo paau
jissay tera kaam niklayuskay lag ja paau

Rishvat ka bazar garam hey, loot skay to loot
ant kal pghtayage jab pran jayage chhoot

Rishvat latay hua pakad gaao to kar ligyay ek kaam
Rishvat dekar chhoot jayea yahi siyano kaam

Jhoot braber tap nahi, saanch braber paap
Jaakey harday may jhoot hai takay harday aap
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2010, 01:36:23 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on November 02, 2010, 01:25:27 PM
Riswat ka bazar garam hai,eesay bacha n koy
Eesay koi bach gaya to vah deenbandhu sun hoi
 
Bharshtachar k karan ho raha desh ka vikas
Agar bharshtachar mit gaya to kaise hoga vikas

Nar v naree smaan hay diya savidhan n adhikar
phir bhi naree ka shoshan ho reha kya batayegi sarkar

Neta v afsar doe khade kiskay lagoo paau
jissay tera kaam niklayuskay lag ja paau

Rishvat ka bazar garam hey, loot skay to loot
ant kal pghtayage jab pran jayage chhoot

Rishvat latay hua pakad gaao to kar ligyay ek kaam
Rishvat dekar chhoot jayea yahi siyano kaam

Jhoot braber tap nahi, saanch braber paap
Jaakey harday may jhoot hai takay harday aap
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2010, 06:53:33 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on November 02, 2010, 01:25:27 PM
Riswat ka bazar garam hai,eesay bacha n koy
Eesay koi bach gaya to vah deenbandhu sun hoi
 
Bharshtachar k karan ho raha desh ka vikas
Agar bharshtachar mit gaya to kaise hoga vikas

Nar v naree smaan hay diya savidhan n adhikar
phir bhi naree ka shoshan ho reha kya batayegi sarkar

Neta v afsar doe khade kiskay lagoo paau
jissay tera kaam niklayuskay lag ja paau

Rishvat ka bazar garam hey, loot skay to loot
ant kal pghtayage jab pran jayage chhoot

Rishvat latay hua pakad gaao to kar ligyay ek kaam
Rishvat dekar chhoot jayea yahi siyano kaam

Jhoot braber tap nahi, saanch braber paap
Jaakey harday may jhoot hai takay harday aap

sir ji maaf kijiyega doha lekhan ki prakriya sahi nahi lag rahi mujhe...theek he par umda nahi...aisa mujhe lagta hai..

apka idea kabil-e-tareef hai..

kuch ek dohe bahut achhe he...

kuchh meri or se bhi..

jhoot jhoot me jag rama sancha na dikhya koyee,
"Abhi" baat jo sanchi kahe bairi bahutere hoyee~
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2010, 03:22:22 PM »
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Ram krishan Jee AadaaB

Behad sahiN kaha hai aapne......
Aadhunik yug ki sachai hai.... Jisme humari aapki parchai hai..

Aapke khayaal behad khoob rahe....
Likhate rahiye....
Khush Rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2010, 03:35:13 PM »
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Mere dohe aapko achhey lage Dhanyawad. I have written about 100 dohey
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verynice
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2014, 05:15:49 PM »
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आजकल के समाज के दोहे पढ़ने वाले सभी पाठकों का धन्यवाद
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