Mera ek jawab

by Rishi Agarwal on September 17, 2009, 01:47:10 PM
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Mujhe meri ek frnd ne ek shayri bheji :---

Jindagi k safar me aapka saath hum denge,
ni dosti ki saugat hum denge.
Girrne lago to apna haath hum denge.
OR agar na gire 1 laat hum denge....

Meine uski is shayri ka jawab is andaj me diya :--


Aisa kroge to apko tadafna padega
Aur her bat pe apko rona padega
Aap to maroge hume lat per jab
Aur tut jayegi apki wo hadddiya
To apke karan hume bhi rona padega
Hum girne lage to ap to sath na denge
But jab apko giroge to.......
Hume apna Hath apke hath me dena padega
Aisi dosti mat nibhao aap
Jiske liye her bar aashuo ki dhara ko bahana padega

kya ye jawab sahi tha mera
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rkswatian
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2009, 01:57:58 PM »
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Bohut Achey Bro

Achay hain
But Littel Bit...
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2009, 01:59:47 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on September 17, 2009, 01:47:10 PM
Mujhe meri ek frnd ne ek shayri bheji :---

Jindagi k safar me aapka saath hum denge,
ni dosti ki saugat hum denge.
Girrne lago to apna haath hum denge.
OR agar na gire 1 laat hum denge....

Meine uski is shayri ka jawab is andaj me diya :--


Aisa kroge to apko tadafna padega
Aur her bat pe apko rona padega
Aap to maroge hume lat per jab
Aur tut jayegi apki wo hadddiya
To apke karan hume bhi rona padega
Hum girne lage to ap to sath na denge
But jab apko giroge to.......
Hume apna Hath apke hath me dena padega
Aisi dosti mat nibhao aap
Jiske liye her bar aashuo ki dhara ko bahana padega

kya ye jawab sahi tha mera
yeh bhi try karke dekho.....rishi agarwal ji.......

ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN AAP SAATH HAME DENA,
NI DOSTI KI SAUGAT HAME DENA,
GIRNE LAGUN TOH AAP HAATH HAME DENA,
NA GIRUN TOH,HAM 1 LAAT AAP KO DENGE.
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2009, 04:16:03 PM »
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Chahe thaam le chahe gira de
Tu chahta hai jo wo tu kar k dikha de
Hum wo hai jo dil se har rishta nibhaye
Tu chahe to hamein dosti ki saja de

ye bhi ho skta hai......
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2009, 07:55:12 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rishi ji,sahi jawab diya aapne,wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji n Nikhaar ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2009, 05:47:21 AM »
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Quote from: rkswatian on September 17, 2009, 01:57:58 PM
Bohut Achey Bro

Achay hain
But Littel Bit...
Quote from: cara on September 17, 2009, 01:59:47 PM
yeh bhi try karke dekho.....rishi agarwal ji.......

ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN AAP SAATH HAME DENA,
NI DOSTI KI SAUGAT HAME DENA,
GIRNE LAGUN TOH AAP HAATH HAME DENA,
NA GIRUN TOH,HAM 1 LAAT AAP KO DENGE.
Quote from: Nikhaar on September 17, 2009, 04:16:03 PM
Chahe thaam le chahe gira de
Tu chahta hai jo wo tu kar k dikha de
Hum wo hai jo dil se har rishta nibhaye
Tu chahe to hamein dosti ki saja de

ye bhi ho skta hai......
Quote from: madhuwesh on September 17, 2009, 07:55:12 PM
Wah bahut khoob Rishi ji,sahi jawab diya aapne,wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji n Nikhaar ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka
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priyanka.jasmine
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2009, 03:39:49 PM »
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nice one
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amit (manav)
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2010, 05:36:28 AM »
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jindagi main kisi na kisi ne pyar main choot khayi hogi,
ai duniya walo ye baat sab ko bata dena,
mujhe lat maar kar unke nazuk paon main choot to aayi hogi,
ai mere khuda kisi na ki se se inke poan main marahm lagwa dena...
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