tukde sade dil de

by lovely_nancy on January 22, 2010, 11:23:14 PM

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lovely_nancy

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my 2nd try hope u like it
please comment and suggest improvementss:

Karke tu tukde sade dil de,
sanu kala chad tur chaleya,
kiteya yakeena nu pairaan nal mar,
ohde uto tur chaleya,
jaa bhul jana tere varge yaar nu,
karke tabah tere darda nu,
asi jieunde ji mar chale aa


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mrZakram

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2010, 03:25:19 AM »

nice lovely keep it up Applause


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arifuddin

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 04:15:36 AM »

wadi ya bohat wadiya


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2010, 08:01:24 AM »

Bahut Khub Nancy Ji Nice


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deepika_divya

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 11:00:51 AM »

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!. Keep it up...!


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lovely_nancy

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2010, 10:35:42 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on January 23, 2010, 11:00:51 AM

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!. Keep it up...!

thank u


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lovely_nancy

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2010, 10:35:58 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 23, 2010, 08:01:24 AM

Bahut Khub Nancy Ji Nice

thank u


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lovely_nancy

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2010, 10:36:28 PM »

Quote from: mrZakram on January 23, 2010, 03:25:19 AM

nice lovely keep it up Applause

thank u


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lovely_nancy

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2010, 10:36:49 PM »

Quote from: arifuddin on January 23, 2010, 04:15:36 AM

wadi ya bohat wadiya

thnks


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strange

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Re: tukde sade dil de

«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2010, 07:39:23 PM »

good one....keep it up


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