Vichorda

by Pooja on March 20, 2006, 03:31:40 PM
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Pooja
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Vichorda tere payar da, hun kiven saha
tu ta murr vekhaya nahi, zind apni nu kive rova
ek pal nu v tanu, mera cheta na ayya
in hanjuan nu, kive chupava
ik baar murd ki ve aja
manu apna chehra dikha ja
dil hum hor nahi lagdan mera
sahan janda nahi, teri bewafai da vichorda!!!
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Devdas_online
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2006, 06:35:05 AM »
Very nice Pooja Ji...Keep It Up
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2006, 06:44:10 AM »
ki haal hai mera dil da,
kehre shabdan vich main kalam kara

kinna intezar si mainu tere sath da
kehre lafjan vich main bayaan kara

hunde burre vichore sajna de
das kiwe main mann nu samjhava

jad dil de mehram hi door ne
main kisnu haal sunawa... !!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2006, 06:50:26 AM »
bahut hi wadiya likhya Jeet aur Pooja ji ......... Usual Smile
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Anushka
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2006, 09:51:08 AM »
Good one Pooja and Jeet... bahut achi likhi hai aap dono nay..

Viched kay na meh jeendi aa
Dila diya tey tu chud day.... apni suna tu kahaniyaa
Meray dil da hal nei koi teray to begar
Hun tay na meh jeeni aa tey na merdi aa
teray vichord nu hi meh gelay legakay... chaldi aa
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2006, 04:07:19 PM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
ki haal hai mera dil da,
kehre shabdan vich main kalam kara

kinna intezar si mainu tere sath da
kehre lafjan vich main bayaan kara

hunde burre vichore sajna de
das kiwe main mann nu samjhava

jad dil de mehram hi door ne
main kisnu haal sunawa... !!!


wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot vadiya likha hai Jeet!! Good one Anu!!
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2006, 04:14:23 PM »
too good Pooja sis, Anushka n Jeet....
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Anushka
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2006, 09:42:58 PM »
Nikki fir kendi aa meh ... likh lay karday dhemaka.... :D  Thx anyway
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2006, 05:02:15 AM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
ki haal hai mera dil da,
kehre shabdan vich main kalam kara

kinna intezar si mainu tere sath da
kehre lafjan vich main bayaan kara

hunde burre vichore sajna de
das kiwe main mann nu samjhava

jad dil de mehram hi door ne
main kisnu haal sunawa... !!!



na kah koi shabd,
mai nigah teri pad loogi
dekh sirf ek najar mujko
vichore da dard samjh loogi
dil tere da haal, mere dil to juda nahi
tu bol apne hi dil mai, mai apne dil se sun loogi....
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2007, 02:28:18 PM »
too good Pooja sis..

dil te zor chaliya nahi
main vi pyar kar liya
laggi valiyan ton vichoda seh nahi hunda
ajj main vi iss gall da ikraar kar liya
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banku
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2007, 11:46:56 AM »
Great
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2008, 07:57:09 PM »
vichorda tera seha nahi janda
hanjua naal tanu bhulaya nahi janda
murd aa v sajna bery mere
is tarah ta pyar nibhaya nahi jaanda
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