yaar milna aukha

by lovely_nancy on January 23, 2010, 04:49:11 AM
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hey guys this is my first ever written shayari
i apologise for any mistakes
i hope you like it
and please comment:


Gavaeya Sacha yaar fer milna aukha,
Dil toh utereya yaar fer yaar banauna aukha,
tote hoe dil naal fer dil lagauna aukha
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Lost true love is hard to find again
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its even harder to be able to love again with a broken heart
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2010, 01:30:42 PM »
Nice Nancy Ji Keep It Up
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 04:33:59 PM »
Good One ! Keep writing ....
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2010, 12:54:15 AM »
Nice Nancy Ji Keep It Up

thank u
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2010, 12:54:30 AM »
Good One ! Keep writing ....

thanks a lot
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2010, 12:58:25 AM »
Welcome Nancy ji.thoda bahut samajh mein aayi.agar aap english mein likhte achi tarah samaj jaati. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2010, 03:50:40 AM »
Welcome Nancy ji.thoda bahut samajh mein aayi.agar aap english mein likhte achi tarah samaj jaati. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

as u said I have also written the translation in english
I hope dat helps
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2010, 03:55:53 AM »
Awesome Writing Skills..
I Appreciate it ...
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2010, 04:00:42 AM »
Thak you so much Nancy ji.very touching and lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2010, 04:04:56 AM »
Awesome Writing Skills..
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thank u
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