Hey Ishwar !!

by Talat on February 27, 2007, 12:50:39 AM
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Mata bhi tum pita bhi tum, har roop main ho tum
Baste ho hridai main, kahan bhakton se door tum

Kin shabdon se karun aaj main vandana tumhari
Karuna ki moorat tum, prem ka aseem sagar tum

Maine apna jeevan kiya tum par arpan, Prabhu
Bujhe na kabhi, mere jeevan ki wo ho jyot tum

Hey Ishwar, tan man se main teri hi bhakti karun
Apni kripa drishti na kabhi mujh se pherna tum
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2007, 05:35:43 AM »
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Hey Ishwar.. Permeshwar
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2007, 01:11:21 PM »
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very nice talat ji.............nice lines & feelings also.............

bhatke hue mere jivan ki ,naiyya tum hi paar karo
hey ishwar! apni karuna se mera bhi uddhaar karo

sacchayi pe chalu sada main, badi ki raah se hatkar
sadev tumhara bhakt rahu main sirf itna upkaar karo

na mile bhalr sukhmay jivan ,na safaltao ki sidi
per hardam tera dam bharu aise mere aachar karo

pita ke krodh main kabhi ,kabhi maa ki mamta mai
tere karmo se hou abhibhoot aise karam harbaar karo

tujhko hi sab kuch maane hum ,tera hi hum gungaan kare
jaage leker sab naam tera aisi subah tyyar karo

baato mai hamari kuran ho ,geeta ho hamari soch mai
har chorahe pe tum masjid har ghar mai haridwar karo
hey ishwar! apni karuna se mera bhi uddhar karo

...........................@fahi@.................................
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 02:55:05 PM »
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Thanks Paani ...and Fahi.....!!

Fahi ! aapne bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 05:11:33 PM »
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Talat..Accha likha..

Fahi, a really nice compilation ..
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 05:12:54 PM »
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bahoot khoob Talat. bahoot hi payari archana likhi hai!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2007, 01:08:55 AM »
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Thanks Ricky...and Pooja for appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2007, 07:16:36 AM »
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Talat sis Bahut khoob.  .... Fahi apne bhi bada acha likha hai...

I Love GOD
Divya
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2007, 01:29:15 AM »
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Thanks a lot Divya Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2007, 05:22:08 AM »
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sukriya!

 jaati hai jahan tak ye drishti faila ghanghor andhera hai
 hai sehmi hui manav jaati  ujda hua har basera hai
sach ka hai nahi bolbala kahi, na kahi  shanti ki sthiti
krodh aur paap ka nirantat tandav karta ab savera hai


 mere is jalte gulshan ki zamee pe  phir se bahar karo
hey ishwar! apni shakti se phir se tum chamtkaar karo.

..............................@fahi@...............................
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2007, 06:40:54 PM »
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good one pjag ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2007, 04:45:34 PM »
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Bohot khoob Fahi
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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2008, 07:30:42 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2009, 04:19:08 PM »
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wah kaash ji ajj apki wajah se ek baar phir se itani achi Aarti padne ka avsar mila....

Bahoot bahoot he achi Aarti ki rachna ki hai apne Celmira!!! Good creation!!!
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