Jal rahi hai basti basti.....soudagar

by soudagar on August 23, 2012, 04:27:53 PM
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Jal rahi hai basti basti , sahar huye shmashan dekho
kaat raha apno ka sar, beraham hua insan dekho

mehfuj nahi kuch bhi yahan mandir maszid ho ya makan
nahi baksha jaata koi, lut raha hai yahan bhagwan dekho

har taraf hai chabuk ki maar, hatyare liye khade hathiyar
masoom dard se ro rahe, hans raha hai yahan shaitan dekho

kisi ka hota balatkar, kisi nari se karvate deh-vyapar
nahi mahfuj ghar mein naari, lut raha nari ka samman dekho

bacho ko b na baksha jata, khel kud ki umr me kam lag jata
baal shoshan ki wajah se bacho ka hua bachpan veeran dekho

jurm dekh aage badh jata, ye soch nahi hai isse koi rista nata
khudgarj ho gaya hai insan, nahi rahi ise apno ki pehchan dekho

mantri hamare biryani khate, apni hi tareef k qisse sunate
inka paisa hi hua bhagwan, nahi inka koi deen iman dekho

lagta hai yeh dekh ke sab , nahi badlega desh mein kuch ab
"soudagar"na kar waqt apna jaya, jakar apna kaam dekho
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2012, 04:32:59 PM »
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Jal rahi hai basti basti , sahar huye shmashan dekho
kaat raha apno ka sar, beraham hua insan dekho

mehfuj nahi kuch bhi yahan mandir maszid ho ya makan
nahi baksha jaata koi, lut raha hai yahan bhagwan dekho

har taraf hai chabuk ki maar, hatyare liye khade hathiyar
masoom dard se ro rahe, hans raha hai yahan shaitan dekho

kisi ka hota balatkar, kisi nari se karvate deh-vyapar
nahi mahfuj ghar mein naari, lut raha nari ka samman dekho

bacho ko b na baksha jata, khel kud ki umr me kam lag jata
baal shoshan ki wajah se bacho ka hua bachpan veeran dekho

jurm dekh aage badh jata, ye soch nahi hai isse koi rista nata
khudgarj ho gaya hai insan, nahi rahi ise apno ki pehchan dekho

mantri hamare biryani khate, apni hi tareef k qisse sunate
inka paisa hi hua bhagwan, nahi inka koi deen iman dekho

lagta hai yeh dekh ke sab , nahi badlega desh mein kuch ab
"soudagar"na kar waqt apna jaya, jakar apna kaam dekho
 



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AAPNE HUM SAB INSAANO.N KE DUKH AUR WAHI PURAANI SOCH KO KHOOBSOORTI AUR NAYE ANDAAZ MEIN PESH KIYA HAI



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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2012, 05:24:24 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2012, 06:01:05 PM »
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bahut khoob.lekin soudagar ji paristish men kyu?
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 01:16:18 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 12:44:35 PM »
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Jal rahi hai basti basti , sahar huye shmashan dekho
kaat raha apno ka sar, beraham hua insan dekho

mehfuj nahi kuch bhi yahan mandir maszid ho ya makan
nahi baksha jaata koi, lut raha hai yahan bhagwan dekho

har taraf hai chabuk ki maar, hatyare liye khade hathiyar
masoom dard se ro rahe, hans raha hai yahan shaitan dekho

kisi ka hota balatkar, kisi nari se karvate deh-vyapar
nahi mahfuj ghar mein naari, lut raha nari ka samman dekho

bacho ko b na baksha jata, khel kud ki umr me kam lag jata
baal shoshan ki wajah se bacho ka hua bachpan veeran dekho

jurm dekh aage badh jata, ye soch nahi hai isse koi rista nata
khudgarj ho gaya hai insan, nahi rahi ise apno ki pehchan dekho

mantri hamare biryani khate, apni hi tareef k qisse sunate
inka paisa hi hua bhagwan, nahi inka koi deen iman dekho

lagta hai yeh dekh ke sab , nahi badlega desh mein kuch ab
"soudagar"na kar waqt apna jaya, jakar apna kaam dekho
 

Aaj ki sachchai , bahut khoob
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