Mohammad Touhid
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«Reply #15 on: August 15, 2011, 07:29:46 PM » |
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Kisne kaha woh kisi kaa hai
Jisne maana woh usi kaa hai
Baat apne yakeede kii hai
Khuda to yaha sabhi kaa hai
Door bhi kar sakte hai doorii
Faasla to bus nabii kaa hai
Jo mile usi mein khush rah ley
Yeh tarikaa to valii kaa hai
Dey duaa ya baddua dey tuu
Majaraa terii khushii kaa hai
Has ke bolo bhool jaao gam
Falsafaa yeh zindagi kaa hai
Parwaz sahab Aadaab... 
Subhan Allah...
Bahut Khoob Janab,....
Dil Ko bada sukoon mila ye kalaam padhkar...
bahut achhe... aise hi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...
HOKE SHARMINDA GUNAAHO SE SAJDE ME JAA TO SAHI.,
WO KAREGA MUAAF TUJHE TU ASHK BAHA TO SAHI..,
WO TO RAHIM HAI KARIM HAI SUNTA HAI SABKI DUA.,
ISH AQEEDE SE TU APNE HAATH FAILA TO SAHI..,
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Gyan Prakash
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«Reply #16 on: August 15, 2011, 07:42:40 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya...Parwaaz Ji...Kuchha urdu ke shabdon ka artha samajhne mein humein pareshani hoti hai...matlab batane ke liye shukriya..ummeed hai is mamale mein bhi aapka sath humein milega...!!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 16, 2011, 07:45:49 PM » |
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Parwaaz jee, Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai apne..Akhri do lines behad kareeb rahi..  Ek shikayat hai.. Ap zada likha karein, ya ager likhte hon, toh zada post karein.. Ap kay kalam dil kay kareeb hote hai.. Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #18 on: August 17, 2011, 07:02:17 PM » |
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bohat bohat khoob parwaaz sahab sabhi ashaar badhiya kahen hain aapne dad kabul karen
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«Reply #19 on: August 17, 2011, 07:08:10 PM » |
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #23 on: August 17, 2011, 09:20:29 PM » |
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ye hui na baat Parwaaz sahab-- itna khubsurat aap likhte hain aur jaldi likhte hi nahi.. waah janaab kia kalaam likha hai aapne--aur sach likha hai-- khuda to yahan sabhi ka hai-- hazaaron daad aapki iss behtareen soch par. aapki kalam se agla kalaam likhne me jada waqt na lagaye yahi umeed karte hain-- khus rahiye bazm ki raunak aapse hi hai iss raunak ko badhate rahiye tata
Janab badi khushi hui jaankar ke aapko humari
kalaam pasand aayi..
hum aapke tah e dil se shukra guzaar hai.. ke
aapne apna kimti waqt diya aur houNsla afzai ki
Jee koshish jaari hai jaldi hi kuch post kareNge..
Apna saath banaye rakhiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
khuda Hafez |
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«Reply #27 on: February 23, 2012, 07:26:44 PM » |
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bahut acha likha hai parwaaz ji...
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #28 on: August 30, 2012, 07:31:38 AM » |
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bht bht khoob parwaz ji....
Sply 2nd one.....
Manzil E Ishq jee Aadaab!
kahaaN gayab hai aajkal aap... ?
Wel bahut bahut shukriyaa jee is khoob houNsla afzai
ke liye .. Hum aapke tah e dil se shukraguzar haiN...
Aate rahiye... Saath banaye rakhiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
khuda Hafez.. |
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«Reply #29 on: October 04, 2012, 06:54:32 PM » |
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