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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere
Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere
Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere
Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2011, 11:03:17 AM » |
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere
Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere
Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere
Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
Aik tum hi nahi ho "ParwaaZ" diwaane mere
bahut hi sanjida aur khoobsoorat ehsaas..............!!!
tune hi diye hain bol meri awaaz ko,
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Gyan Prakash
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2011, 11:03:23 AM » |
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Bahut khubsoorat likha aapne Parwaaz Ji...Daad..!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2011, 11:05:32 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2011, 11:07:59 AM » |
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Parwaaz saheb,bahut khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai.Doosra she'r aur maqta khaas taur se qaabil e muarakbaad hain.yuunhi apne kalaam se nawaazte rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2011, 11:21:58 AM » |
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bahut bahut aur bahut khub parwazji...
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2011, 11:40:56 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2011, 11:57:26 AM » |
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Kuch to maraasim hoNge tujhse purane mere
KhiNch laate hai jo tujh tak ye bahaane mere
Har jagaaH teri yaadeN mujh ko sataati haiN
YeH Koun batlaata hai unhe thikaane mere
Saathi the raaz e dil ke Dil e azeez bhi the
Sun ke haste haiN wohi dost fasaane mere
Itna kah kar usne rishta hum se tod hii diyaa
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2011, 05:27:13 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2011, 04:46:42 AM » |
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Parwaaz Ji,
Waah..waah bahut khoob kya kahne
yoon to har sher bahut achchha hai
par maqte ka jawab naheen.
Dili daad o mubarkbaad qubool farmaayen.
Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2011, 05:22:06 AM » |
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bahut acha g
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 07:51:31 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: September 20, 2011, 09:51:17 AM » |
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Bahut khubsoorat likha aapne Parwaaz Ji...Daad..!!
G P JEe Aadaab!
Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aage bhi saath dete rahiye..
HouNslaa afzai karte rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Khudaa Hafez.. |
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