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Dil ki hazaaroN khwahishoN ko dil meiN daba liya...
Hum ne bhi doosri raah par kadam badha liya
Milaa ke nazareN aap sharmsaar ho na jayeN
Lo humne khud hi apni palkoN ko jhuka liya
Aa naa payeNgi sadaayeN bhi ab tumko humari
Teri duniyaa se door humne ghar basa liya
MileN habeeb to rakhabat bhi shumaar thi
Kurbat ka nahi doori ka raasta dikha liya
Tujhko khushiyaaN naseeb ho eh dilber mere
Humne dard o gham ko toh humsafar bana liya
Duniyaa waale to zarra saath bhi naa de sakeN
Humne khud apni laash ko kandhe utha liya
Tumhe mere naam se "ParwaaZ" nafrat thi
Lo naam bhi humne khud hi apna mita liya
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2010, 02:41:20 AM » |
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Bohat Khoob Janab Parwaab Sahab.
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2010, 07:28:10 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2010, 12:52:35 PM » |
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Milaa ke nazareN aap sharmsaar ho na jayeN
Lo humne khud hi apni palkoN ko jhuka liya
Sameer Ji .... Bahut Khoob .... Badhaa hi maasoom aur pyara Khayal laga mujhe .... yeh sher ... !
Tamaam Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut khoobsurti se adaa hue hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi likte rahen ... apni umdaa peshkash se ru-ba-ru karaate rahe aage bhi ... khush rahen....
duaaon ke saath ....
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2010, 01:10:14 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob parwaazji..
Har Ek Ashaar lajawaab..
Bahut Ache.. 
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2010, 11:45:57 PM » |
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mila ke nazreiN aap shamrsaar ho na jaayeiN
lo humne khud hi apni palkoN ko jhuka lia
kya baat hai waah waah Sameer sahab jawaab nahi aapke is sher ka waah mashaAllah kya khoob andaaz hai hazaaroN daad aapke is lehje ki nazr qubool keejiye Allah kar zor e qalam aur ziyaadah
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2010, 04:09:06 PM » |
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Bohat Khoob Janab Parwaab Sahab.
Janab Yash Sahab aadaab!
Yo india meiN aapka isteqbal karte hai......
Aapko humari kalaam pasand aayi tahe dil se shukria....
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
Aate rahiye......
Khush rahiye....
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2010, 04:58:55 PM » |
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kya kahun parwz ji aapki iss nazm k liye....bas dil ko chhu gai ...
suni thi lekin padhkar to aur bhi maza aaya.....
kuch likha hai ji aap jaisa nahin na aapne bataya uss tarah ban pai ye ..ek koshish hai dil ki baat kehne ki.....
Lakeeron se maine apna hath saja liya
Tu na mila to maine in hathon ko jala diya
Tere naam se sajte rahe the mere din aur raat
Ek teri baat ne mujhe tanhaoyon se mila diya
Gehri nahin thi chot par dard bht hi tha
Jab tumne hathon se mere kangan hata diya
Ashkon k daaman me baithe rahe the hum bhi
Logon ne magar naam se tere chhat pe bula diya
Dekh duaon ka chaan fir se manga tha kal raat tujhe
Lekin khuda ne aaj mujhko dua ka ye sila diya
Ab na koi khwaish na koi umang reh gai jeene ki
Maine khud ko ab chalti firti ek laash bana diya...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2010, 08:24:01 PM » |
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bahut khoob parwaaj sahab... akhri ke do sher to sabse laajawab hain... bahut badhiya... !
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2010, 08:33:24 PM » |
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HAZARON SAAL UMAR HO AAPKI ,KAYA ACHCHE ANDAAZ ME KAHA HAI AAPNE ....DAAD ...DAAD..SUBHAAN ALLAH
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