Takdeer ban gayi

by harinderbhasin on October 20, 2015, 09:05:36 AM
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Tumhare dar pe aate hi takdeer ban gayi,
Tumahre angan ki dehleez hamari jageer ban gayi.

Hamne toh khichi thi kuch lakeerein yunhi,
Dhayan se dekha toh tumhari tasveer ban gayi.

Tumhari deed ka kuch aisa hua asar mujh per,
Mere liye woh masihayi ki taseer ban gayi.

Jabse tumne apni sharan main bulaya,
Tu ranjha main teri heer ban gayi.

Jab jab aati hain tumhari yaadein mujhko,
Ankhon se tapakta hua neer ban gayi.
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2015, 05:51:55 AM »
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Jaane Yeh Mausam, Jaane Yeh Mausam
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Jaane Yeh Mausam, Jaane Yeh Mausam
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2015, 01:24:09 PM »
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