मेरे ख्वाबों में जब - By "Betaab".

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मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

मेरे ख्वाबों की दहलीच पर अचानक,
उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

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जब तक जिन्दा थी मेरे दहलीज पर न आये होगे
मेरे मरने के बाद ही मेरा जनाजा उठाने आये होगे
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मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

मेरे ख्वाबों की दहलीच पर अचानक,
उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".

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मेरे ख्वाबों में जब वो आये होंगे,
मुझको एकदम तनहा पाये होंगे.

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उनके क़दम जरूर डगमगाए होंगे.

मुझको बर्बाद होता देखकर न जाने क्यों,
मन ही मन में जरूर मुस्कराये होंगे.

रूबरू मिलने की उनमें हिम्मत कहाँ,
इसीलिए नींद में मुझको सताने आये होंगे.

मुझको तवाह करके भी वो संतुष्ट नहीं,
तभी तो रक़ीबों को घर मेरा दिखाने आये होंगे.

मेरी बर्बाद मोहब्बत की बरसी पर "बेताब",
अपने घर में घी के चिराग जलाये होंगे.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".

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बहुत खूब  Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower

जब तक जिन्दा थी मेरे दहलीज पर न आये होगे
मेरे मरने के बाद ही मेरा जनाजा उठाने आये होगे

So Many Thanks to You Sir. Additional lines ke liye alag se Shukriya. Lines achchhi lagi.
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