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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2013, 09:33:38 PM » |
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Great lines..
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2013, 10:08:30 PM » |
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2013, 10:16:00 PM » |
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Arey arey.. aajaeye mai addmission dedungi free mein.. |
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2013, 10:20:51 PM » |
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arre janaab ham khud issme haare huye hai....  behtar hoga kisi talented se classes lo.. |
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2013, 10:28:08 PM » |
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arre janaab ham khud issme haare huye hai.... behtar hoga kisi talented se classes lo.. Arey sahibaan qadardaan mai hu na.. Hm hai to kya ghum hai.. |
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2013, 10:36:33 PM » |
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Tum dono ke chakker main pada to shayad
hospital mai admission jaroor ho jayega
Majak mai kah raha hoo
first chapter kya ha teacher jee
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2013, 10:55:20 PM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat nazm hai
thahar -2 kar padhne par mazboor karta hai.
bahut badhiya
shayad kuch mazboori..sach likha hai..par swayam koi dhaarna banana accha naheen.
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2013, 11:10:11 PM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat nazm hai
thahar -2 kar padhne par mazboor karta hai.
bahut badhiya
shayad kuch mazboori..sach likha hai..par swayam koi dhaarna banana accha naheen.
sahi kaha aapne...par main use bewafaa nahi kahna chahti isiliye yahi sochti hun ki shyd koi mazboori rahi hogi tab hi chala gaya... |
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2013, 11:14:26 PM » |
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Neha Je Bahut Khoob Likha,Bahut Umda.!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2013, 11:49:51 PM » |
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ise bataur kalaam pahdeN.
aapne likha hai
jo karta tha beinteha mahobaat mujhse...
aaj voh insaan badal gaya??
bewafa kaha nahee ..samajh liya
posting section bhi..dard-e- bewafawai
aur dher saari shikaayteN
Laal rang neele par bhari hai meri samajh men..
mai ghalat bhi ho sakta hun.
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2013, 11:57:23 PM » |
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very nice
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«Reply #13 on: October 13, 2013, 12:10:15 AM » |
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waah waah
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #14 on: October 13, 2013, 01:43:38 AM » |
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Tum dono ke chakker main pada to shayad
hospital mai admission jaroor ho jayega
Majak mai kah raha hoo
first chapter kya ha teacher jee
1st chapter ka naam hai "HOW TO LOVE".. |
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on eTI community..
