Aapni galtiyon ki saja

by poppoetry on June 23, 2009, 10:39:03 AM
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Ye raat kaisi bebas si tanha si aai hai
Teri bewafai ka manjar sang apne ye lai hai

Dost bhi juthe nikle mohabbat bhi juthi nikali
Zindagi bhi meri ye kya rang layi hai

Har pal badalta h tu roop apna
Kabhi pyar to kabhi nafarat tujhme samai hai

Dosto ne toda mere pyar ka aashiyaana
Meri mohabbat ne hi ki meri jag hasai hai

Aaj barso baad chalke h aankho se ashq meri
Ye raat jo saamne layi tum sab ki sachai hai

Sulagte sholon par chal rahi hu mai maano
Dil ro-ro kar puchta h,ae Khuda kya yahi teri Khudai hai

Kra unhe unki galtiyon ka aehsaas ,de unhe bhi saja
Jinhone dosti k rup me dushmani nibhayi hai

Kya dosh du mai kisi ko dil ye bhi kehta h
Apni hi galtiyon ki saja maine payi h

Maar diya aaj se maine khud ko tumhare liye
Khushiya manao tum sab ,kar di maine apni tumse judai h
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2009, 12:59:12 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Kya Khoob Likha hai Pooja Jaan, Dil khush kar diya yaar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umda Work..Khoobsurat Alfaaz..Behtreen Jajbaat!!!.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo rukna nahi chahte, ham jaane dena nahi chahte,
Haaye ye kaisi bereham judayi hai..

Suni jo khabar bewafyi ki teri aur se,
Kasam se meri to aankh bhar aayi hai..

Mujhse hi aata hai nafrat se pesh tu,
Suna hai auro ke liye dil me mohabbat chipayi hai.

Mohabbat ko paana, maano khuda ka karam,
Magar toot.te dil ki peer bahut dukhdayi hai..

Shally.
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junaidqadir
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2009, 01:09:17 PM »
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bahoth qoob shally and poppetry very nice !!

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2009, 01:45:13 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja.. Behad Dard Bhare Alfaaz likhe Hain Dear.. Padh kar Dil Me Ek Dard Sa Hua... ki Kis Kadar Dost Ki Bewafaai ko Lafzon ke zariye Saamne rakha hai aapne.. Bahut Kuch Padh kar Such sa Laga.. Bahut bahut Khoooooooob Pooja... daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 01:48:12 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 23, 2009, 12:59:12 PM
Wah Wah Wah Kya Khoob Likha hai Pooja Jaan, Dil khush kar diya yaar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umda Work..Khoobsurat Alfaaz..Behtreen Jajbaat!!!.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo rukna nahi chahte, ham jaane dena nahi chahte,
Haaye ye kaisi bereham judayi hai..

Suni jo khabar bewafyi ki teri aur se,
Kasam se meri to aankh bhar aayi hai..

Mujhse hi aata hai nafrat se pesh tu,
Suna hai auro ke liye dil me mohabbat chipayi hai.

Mohabbat ko paana, maano khuda ka karam,
Magar toot.te dil ki peer bahut dukhdayi hai..

Shally.


Shally Dearrrrrrrrrr...... Bahut Hi Dard Bhare Jazzbaat Pesh kiye hain Dear.. Lafzon ko Behad khubsoorati se sajaaya hai.. Lajawab Peshkash hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2009, 08:42:17 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 23, 2009, 12:59:12 PM
Wah Wah Wah Kya Khoob Likha hai Pooja Jaan, Dil khush kar diya yaar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umda Work..Khoobsurat Alfaaz..Behtreen Jajbaat!!!.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo rukna nahi chahte, ham jaane dena nahi chahte,
Haaye ye kaisi bereham judayi hai..

Suni jo khabar bewafyi ki teri aur se,
Kasam se meri to aankh bhar aayi hai..

Mujhse hi aata hai nafrat se pesh tu,
Suna hai auro ke liye dil me mohabbat chipayi hai.

Mohabbat ko paana, maano khuda ka karam,
Magar toot.te dil ki peer bahut dukhdayi hai..

Shally.
teh dil se shukriya dear Shally ji....aapne hmesha hi sath diya h...bas yu hi sath dijiyenga....

bahut pyara likha h aapne....last 4 lines to dil ko chu gyi aur sath hi aankho ko bhi nam kar gyi........bahut pyara Applause Applause Applause
                     
                 
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2009, 08:43:59 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on June 23, 2009, 01:09:17 PM
bahoth qoob shally and poppetry very nice !!

Qadeertoopchi
bahut bahut shukriya junaid bhai
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2009, 08:48:10 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 23, 2009, 01:45:13 PM
Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja.. Behad Dard Bhare Alfaaz likhe Hain Dear.. Padh kar Dil Me Ek Dard Sa Hua... ki Kis Kadar Dost Ki Bewafaai ko Lafzon ke zariye Saamne rakha hai aapne.. Bahut Kuch Padh kar Such sa Laga.. Bahut bahut Khoooooooob Pooja... daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
aapne in alfaazon me chupe dard ko bakhubi samjha h Mann ji.......bahut bahut shukriya.... icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2009, 08:57:45 AM »
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Nice one Pop and good response Shally Ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2009, 09:00:10 AM »
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Wah wah Pooja ji and Shally ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ke likhi aap dono ne.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
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«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2009, 09:28:07 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 24, 2009, 08:57:45 AM
Nice one Pop and good response Shally Ji
Thanks a lot Rajesh ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 24, 2009, 09:29:22 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 24, 2009, 09:00:10 AM
Wah wah Pooja ji and Shally ji,bahut khoob,kamaal ke likhi aap dono ne.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
bahut bahut shukriya madhu ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2009, 12:42:12 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 23, 2009, 10:39:03 AM
Ye raat kaisi bebas si tanha si aai hai
Teri bewafai ka manjar sang apne ye lai hai

Dost bhi juthe nikle mohabbat bhi juthi nikali
Zindagi bhi meri ye kya rang layi hai

Har pal badalta h tu roop apna
Kabhi pyar to kabhi nafarat tujhme samai hai

Dosto ne toda mere pyar ka aashiyaana
Meri mohabbat ne hi ki meri jag hasai hai

Aaj barso baad chalke h aankho se ashq meri
Ye raat jo saamne layi tum sab ki sachai hai

Sulagte sholon par chal rahi hu mai maano
Dil ro-ro kar puchta h,ae Khuda kya yahi teri Khudai hai

Kra unhe unki galtiyon ka aehsaas ,de unhe bhi saja
Jinhone dosti k rup me dushmani nibhayi hai

Kya dosh du mai kisi ko dil ye bhi kehta h
Apni hi galtiyon ki saja maine payi h

Maar diya aaj se maine khud ko tumhare liye
Khushiya manao tum sab ,kar di maine apni tumse judai h



Bohot Khoob Pops Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2009, 12:42:48 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 23, 2009, 12:59:12 PM
Wah Wah Wah Kya Khoob Likha hai Pooja Jaan, Dil khush kar diya yaar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Umda Work..Khoobsurat Alfaaz..Behtreen Jajbaat!!!.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo rukna nahi chahte, ham jaane dena nahi chahte,
Haaye ye kaisi bereham judayi hai..

Suni jo khabar bewafyi ki teri aur se,
Kasam se meri to aankh bhar aayi hai..

Mujhse hi aata hai nafrat se pesh tu,
Suna hai auro ke liye dil me mohabbat chipayi hai.

Mohabbat ko paana, maano khuda ka karam,
Magar toot.te dil ki peer bahut dukhdayi hai..

Shally.

Nice reply from you too, Shally
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2009, 01:15:50 PM »
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shukriya celmira ji
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