Adhoori pyaas.....premdeep

by premdeep on November 16, 2013, 09:05:09 PM
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Meri tanhaiyon ko badane wale
Dil kisi aur ka behlane wale
khush to tu bhi naa reh paega
Tera bhi dil jab koi dukhaega
Tab tujhko mera pyaar yaad aeega
Dard mera daria sa hai ab to
gam jeene ka zaria sa hai ab to
khoobsorati ab daag si lagti hai
dil mein ek aag si lagti hai
Hain kon ab jo isko bujaega
wo beete din kon mujhko lautaega
wo pyaar ka bhoola hua
ehsaash phir se jagaega
Dekh kitna udaas hun mein
Ek aduri si pyaas hun mein
doobta sooraj sa dil mera
Jism mein kaid ek laash hun mein
Tu mujh par ek ehsaan kar
Mere dil par jakhmon ke aur nishaan kar
Dekhna wo sab seh jaega
Tere har war par muskuraega
bas Tujhko sunai wo pehli gazal
man hi man gungunaega...
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2013, 09:26:00 PM »
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Lafz lafz me dard hai..ye post apki bahut hi achhi rahi..
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2013, 09:38:20 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2013, 01:54:36 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2013, 08:17:28 AM »
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