adhoori rahegi

by salil2002 on January 23, 2007, 09:58:52 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1363 times)
salil2002
Guest
Reply with quote
Ya daastan bhi ab adhoori rahegi
Tere mere beech main ab doori rahegi
Bahut roya hoon tujhe yaad karke
Ab ye aankhen na geeli rahengi

Na shikwa karenge kissii se ab
Na dard apna dikhayenge
Tere diye dard k saath hi
Ab hum muskurayenge………

Tu kar le lakh koshish
Par ab na tootenge hum
Khushiyon se sazayi hai mehfil
Ab door bhaag jayenge gham

Teri jaroorat nahi ab mujhe
Teri yaad hi qaafi hai
Meri soti huyi raaton k liye
Tera ehsaas hi qaafi hai

Ja door ja mujhse
 phir na vaapas aana kabhi
aana toh aise kii
door na jaana  kabhi
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
woh khush rahegi by kiiller_1 in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
zinda to rahenge par zindagi na rahegi by abhieshek in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
ye baatein yaad rahegi(AD) by rayees abdullah in Miscellaneous Shayri
zindagi kab tak dukhi rahegi ~Muzammil~ by Muzammil, in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
SAANSON KI KAMI TO RAHEGI by saahill in Miscellaneous Shayri
anay
Guest
«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2007, 07:47:31 PM »
Reply with quote
very good

Padkar accha laga.
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2007, 11:16:17 AM »
Reply with quote
Bhaoot Khoob Salil....
kamaal ka Likha Hai aapne,..
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2007, 11:19:27 AM »
Reply with quote
Dum Labon Par Hai Agar Ab Bhi Nahi Aaoge,..
Laash Paaoge Meri Mujhko Nahi Paaoge,..
Behtar Yahi Hoga Mujhse Mera Haal na Poocho,..
Mera Haal Sunoge Tum To Tadap Jaaoge,..

__________________________-Jaanasheen-0
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2007, 12:07:29 PM »
Reply with quote
kya baat hai janasheen ji.....................

humein na dikhao maut ka khauff ,woh toh baahon main rehti hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
pyaar se dekho bas ek baar ,jo tujhe meri maut kii khwahish rehti hai
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2007, 08:03:27 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "salil2002"
kya baat hai janasheen ji.....................

humein na dikhao maut ka khauff ,woh toh baahon main rehti hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
pyaar se dekho bas ek baar ,jo tujhe meri maut kii khwahish rehti hai


Thank U Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Janaab Aapne,.
Lage Raho,..
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2007, 08:11:40 AM »
Reply with quote
Maut Se Dosti Karli Humne Jaanasheen,..
Jab Zindagi Ko Dekha Dagaa Dete Hue,..
Ab Maut Hi Manzil Nazar Aati Hai Hume,..
Jab Zindagi Ki Raahon Mein Dekha,.
Doston Ko kaante Daal Te Hue,..

_______________________-Jaanasheen-
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2007, 08:22:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Humse Bewafaai karne Ki Unhone Koi Wajah To Dhoondi Hogi,..
Log To Aaj Bhi Zikar Karte Hain Mehfil Mein, Mere Chahaton Ke Khisse,..

_______________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2007, 06:51:30 PM »
Reply with quote
Very Nice Salil.....and Janasheen !!
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2007, 03:40:45 PM »
Reply with quote
thnks talat
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 5 hours and 12 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19899
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2007, 04:07:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya Talat Ji,..
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
March 29, 2024, 12:57:11 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 08:02:59 PM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:26:05 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:25:04 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:21:26 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.2 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8502 Real Poets and poetry admirer