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« on: April 29, 2008, 10:35:01 PM »
Ajj Subah Sooch Kai Ayi Thi,
Kai Ajj Tujko Baatha Dhoon Gi Mein Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
Magar Ahh Kai Jab Kissi Or Ki Bahoon Mein Tujko Paya,
Tho Yuhn Laga Jaise Dhoonya Yahin Merai Liyai Rook Si Gayi Hai,
Jab Moorh Kai Tumhne Meri Taraf Dehka Tho Yuhn Muskurai Mein Jaise Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Khush Koy Nahin,
Jab Moorh Kai Darwazai Ki Taraf Chalnai Lagi Mein Tho Yuhn Ansoon Girai In Ankhoon Se Jaise Nadi Ka Koy Kinaara Nahin,
Abb THo Yuhn Lagraha Hai Mujko Kai Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Koy Bebaas Nahin....

        Pari.........
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« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2008, 01:04:14 AM »
Quote from: palkhi on April 29, 2008, 10:35:01 PM
Ajj Subah Sooch Kai Ayi Thi,
Kai Ajj Tujko Baatha Dhoon Gi Mein Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
Magar Ahh Kai Jab Kissi Or Ki Bahoon Mein Tujko Paya,
Tho Yuhn Laga Jaise Dhoonya Yahin Merai Liyai Rook Si Gayi Hai,
Jab Moorh Kai Tumhne Meri Taraf Dehka Tho Yuhn Muskurai Mein Jaise Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Khush Koy Nahin,
Jab Moorh Kai Darwazai Ki Taraf Chalnai Lagi Mein Tho Yuhn Ansoon Girai In Ankhoon Se Jaise Nadi Ka Koy Kinaara Nahin,
Abb THo Yuhn Lagraha Hai Mujko Kai Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Koy Bebaas Nahin....

        Pari.........

Palki ...na chahte hue bhi tumhaare iss thread per aya....kyuiNki maiNe kabhibhi tumeh writing ke baare maiN serious nahi dekha....lekin aaj tumhaaarii iss tehreer ko parh ker mujhe bahoot hi dard sa hua...itna pain dil maiN liye baithhi ho..our likhti nahiN kabhi....ye writing paRh ker meri kalam ruk hi nahi paayiii merii taraf se hazaaroN daad kabool kareiN parii ji...tumhari ye tehreer sach poocho toh mujhe bahoot pasand aayiii isme jo ahsaas tumne daale haiN unhe maiN thoda sa edit kerne ki koshish kerta hooN ke kahiN aapke ahsaas tabdeel na ho......umeed hai aapko achha lagega.....God bless you always..

Ab Dekhiye ise kaise present kerna chahiye ek nazer...


__________Subah Sooch Kai Ayi Thi,
Bata Dhoon Gi tujhko...... Iss Dil Ki Haalat,
___Magar dekh gair Ki BahoN Mein ,
bhar gayi dil maiN.... talakh jalalat
Toh YuN Laga ke Jaise
Duniya YahiN mere Liye....bas Ruk Si Gayi Hai
Jab Dekha Tumhne____
Meri Taraf.... muRh ke,
toh anchahi Muskuraii Mein.......
Jaise Iss Dhoonya Mein
Mujhe Jaise .....Khush Koi Nahin hai,
Jab Moorh Kai__________!!!!!
Darwazai Ki Taraf!!!!! Chalnai Lagi Mein,
Toh YuN Ansoon Girey In Ankhoon Se,
Jaise___ Nadi Ka Koi Kinaara Na ho,
___________Ab Toh YuN Lagne laga Hai Mujh ko,
Kai Iss Dhoonya Mein-------
______Mujhe Jaise..... Koi bhi
Bebaas Nahin....
______Mujhe Jaise
Koi bhi
Bebaas Nahin...........

        Pari.........
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« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2008, 06:47:34 AM »
Quote from: palkhi on April 29, 2008, 10:35:01 PM
Ajj Subah Sooch Kai Ayi Thi,
Kai Ajj Tujko Baatha Dhoon Gi Mein Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
Magar Ahh Kai Jab Kissi Or Ki Bahoon Mein Tujko Paya,
Tho Yuhn Laga Jaise Dhoonya Yahin Merai Liyai Rook Si Gayi Hai,
Jab Moorh Kai Tumhne Meri Taraf Dehka Tho Yuhn Muskurai Mein Jaise Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Khush Koy Nahin,
Jab Moorh Kai Darwazai Ki Taraf Chalnai Lagi Mein Tho Yuhn Ansoon Girai In Ankhoon Se Jaise Nadi Ka Koy Kinaara Nahin,
Abb THo Yuhn Lagraha Hai Mujko Kai Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Koy Bebaas Nahin....

        Pari.........

Palkhi bahut accha likha hai. dard bara yeh sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya.
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« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2008, 04:29:23 PM »
Teinku Harash Ji.......actually i have written many times...u just haven't seen them.....

     Teinku Sooooo much Sonia Di.....!
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« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2008, 04:45:18 PM »
soch kar bataoon ga,
teri shayri ko sarahun ya --
esye roun jaise bacha,
soch kar bataoon ga,
tere andar kya gham hai
tere dard men bhi dam hai
soch kar bataoon ga
soch kar bataoon ga


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Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.
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« Reply #5 on: May 03, 2008, 07:38:22 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2008, 04:45:18 PM
soch kar bataoon ga,
teri shayri ko sarahun ya --
esye roun jaise bacha,
soch kar bataoon ga,
tere andar kya gham hai
tere dard men bhi dam hai
soch kar bataoon ga
soch kar bataoon ga


(Syed Naami)

      Can u plzzzzz tranlate that 4 me??? tongue3 NaNaNa tongue3
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« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2008, 07:53:00 PM »
Quote from: palkhi on May 03, 2008, 07:38:22 PM
      Can u plzzzzz tranlate that 4 me??? tongue3 NaNaNa tongue3

Let me think and know you,
should i appreciate your poetry -
or cry like a baby,
Let me think and know you,
What grief lies within you
your agony has a solid power
Let me think and know you,
Let me think and know you.
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.
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« Reply #7 on: May 04, 2008, 10:55:10 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2008, 07:53:00 PM
Let me think and know you,
should i appreciate your poetry -
or cry like a baby,
Let me think and know you,
What grief lies within you
your agony has a solid power
Let me think and know you,
Let me think and know you.

     Oh...ok....thanks..........
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« Reply #8 on: May 04, 2008, 02:28:14 PM »
Okay!!
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.
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« Reply #9 on: May 05, 2008, 07:54:33 PM »
Good one Palkhi!!
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« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2008, 02:52:22 PM »
Teinku DI!!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2008, 11:14:02 AM »
Quote from: palkhi on April 29, 2008, 10:35:01 PM
Ajj Subah Sooch Kai Ayi Thi,
Kai Ajj Tujko Baatha Dhoon Gi Mein Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
Magar Ahh Kai Jab Kissi Or Ki Bahoon Mein Tujko Paya,
Tho Yuhn Laga Jaise Dhoonya Yahin Merai Liyai Rook Si Gayi Hai,
Jab Moorh Kai Tumhne Meri Taraf Dehka Tho Yuhn Muskurai Mein Jaise Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Khush Koy Nahin,
Jab Moorh Kai Darwazai Ki Taraf Chalnai Lagi Mein Tho Yuhn Ansoon Girai In Ankhoon Se Jaise Nadi Ka Koy Kinaara Nahin,
Abb THo Yuhn Lagraha Hai Mujko Kai Iss Dhoonya Mein Mujhe Jaise Koy Bebaas Nahin....

        Pari.........

Wah bahut badiya likhne lagi ho palkhi my dear.. wah wah
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« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2008, 11:02:34 AM »
teinku Roja Di!!!!!!!
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« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2008, 11:08:56 AM »
Welcome dear... kaisi ho?
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