apni ankhon mei

by SUMBUL QAISER on February 16, 2010, 09:51:40 PM
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wo apni ankhon mei basa kyun nahi layta,
agar mei uska hun toh mujhay apna banakyun nahi layta

tanhayun mei aksar meray sath rehta hai,
phir mehfilon mei nazren mila kyun nahi layta.

mehfil mei rehta hai mujh say alag alag sa,
mei kiya hun uska wo bata kyun nahi dayta.

sab k samnay aa kar anjan banta hai aaisay,
jaisay k mei usko dekhai nahi dayta.

haq hai usay chala jaey mujhay chor kar,
agar mei bojh hun toh daman chura kyun  nahi layta
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2010, 10:13:59 PM »
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Nice ghazal Sumbul ji. Bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2010, 01:47:33 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sumbul ji,beautiful gazal,lovely creation
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2010, 05:06:29 PM »
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thanks
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