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by Saba_Saba on August 31, 2006, 03:24:47 PM

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Ek udaAs shaam ateet ki
mujhe bhoolti nahi kabhi
Voh taaro.n ki timtimati raat
Woh sujal ne orhi thi badli kabhi
Jab mili thi khabar teri bewafayi ki
Mai toot kar bikhri thi kitna tabhi
Sada is hriday me tera vaas tha
Tu is dil me basta nahi hai abhi
Woh pal kitne they shant
Chup ho gaye they jaise sabhi
Woh sham ateet ki mai bulaau kaise
Samudra ki taal me ja soya tha ravi


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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2006, 03:40:21 PM »

Wah wah wah ! Kya Khoob Likhya hai Sabaa ! wah!


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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2006, 04:56:39 PM »

Quote from: "nirbhay"

Wah wah wah ! Kya Khoob Likhya hai Sabaa ! wah!

Thanxx Neer

the words inspire me go on ....


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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2006, 03:34:33 AM »

bahut accha likha hai Saba.......


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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2006, 07:41:24 AM »

Thanxxxxxxxxx Vikas

but not like u


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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2006, 11:43:32 AM »

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"

Thanxxxxxxxxx Vikas

but not like you

matlab?


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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2006, 04:53:55 AM »

payar karte the zindgi se hum
payar ke badle pathar mile
chaha the saath kisi ka
badle mai ilzaam mile
na dun kisi ko mijhse koi zakham
humne payar karna chod diya


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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2006, 08:58:31 AM »

JUDA HOKAR BHI JUDA NA HO SAKE,
MARKAR BHI EK PAL KE LIYE TUJHE RULANA SAKE,
TUMNE TO HAATH THAM LIYA KISSI AUR KA,
HUM TO BHOOL KAR BHI TUMHE BHULA NA SAKE.


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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2006, 10:55:37 AM »

Saba, Vikas, Krish.... Superb...

Very nice... all of u... =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2006, 01:25:35 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Saba, Vikaas Krish-Jones Neerbhay,..

Lage Raho,..


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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2006, 01:30:09 PM »

Sehkar Bhi Bewafaai Ka Gham Main Muskuraa Raha Hoon,.
Kiye Zaleem Ne Mujhpar Lakhon Sitam Yaaron Aaj Khud Ko Mein Azmaa Raha Hoon,..

Khabar Na Thi Mujhe Ke Ek Din Wo Mujhe Is Tarah Thukhraayegi,..
Sochkar Us Milan Ki Ghadi Ko Main Aaj Khud Ki Zindagi Mitaa Raha Hoon...

Afsos Bhi Nahi Hota Mujhe Apni Halat Pe Aur Nahi Khushi "Jaanasheen",..
Main Khud Yahan Apni Bebasi Pe Mazaak Udaa Raha Hoon..

Sunkar Sab Muskuraate Gaye Mere Fasaane Ko Is Mehfil Mein,..
Aur Aaj Is Mehfil Mein Bhi Main Apne Geet Sunaa Raha Hoon...

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