Barbaad ker gaya.....ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 24, 2012, 06:10:09 PM
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Koi aaya tha ghar sanwaarne, mujhe bezaar ker gaya,
Berbaadiyo ke naam mera ye jahaan ker gaya,

Apne aanchal se baand ker meri zindagi ki dorr ko,
Mere daaman ko dekho wo taar taar ker gaya,

Jiski aankhon mein lagayi thi meine dil ki mehfil,
Zindagi ko dekho wo hi tanha aur viraan ker gaya,

Chiraag jo jalaye milker, roushan aashiyane kerne ko,
Jala aashiyane ko ussi chiraag se wo hame barbaad ker gaya…
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«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2012, 07:08:02 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2012, 08:19:54 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2012, 08:44:29 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2012, 08:48:41 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2012, 11:14:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
shukriya janaab....
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bahut khoob ritesh jee

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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2012, 11:34:30 AM »
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Koi aaya tha ghar sanwaarne, mujhe bezaar ker gaya,
Berbaadiyo ke naam mera ye jahaan ker gaya,

Apne aanchal se baand ker meri zindagi ki dorr ko,
Mere daaman ko dekho wo taar taar ker gaya,

Jiski aankhon mein lagayi thi meine dil ki mehfil,
Zindagi ko dekho wo hi tanha aur viraan ker gaya,

Chiraag jo jalaye milker, roushan aashiyane kerne ko,
Jala aashiyane ko ussi chiraag se wo hame barbaad ker gaya…


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