BEWAFAI

by khilona on January 21, 2005, 12:04:34 PM
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Arz kiya hai......

Apne naseeb ki kya Dastan sunae hum,
Mili naseeb her bar TANHAAI hai

Aaj char-cha her jagha hone laga hai apna,
Is Nakaam mohabbt me badi JAG HASAAI hai

Jis se umr bhar main Wafa Chahta tha,
Usne her bar Daga Bazi hi NIBHAAI hai

Wo kya karegi kisi se Kabhi Mohabbt,
Jiska dusra naam hi BEWAFA hai

Wo dur hamse hai ja rahi magar us se koi gila nahi,
Mere ghar me kisi ka Matam or uske Ghar me Aaj SHEHNAAI hai

KHILONA
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2005, 05:40:12 PM »
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beautiful!!!!!!!! bohot hi acha likha apne! very touching!
and welcome to yoindia janab!

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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2005, 07:17:59 PM »
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wah!!!

Bewafai ke kisse baar baar
wafa ka kahi naam nahi...
bewafaai ke kisse likhane walo...
kayun wafa mai tumhara naam nahi....
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2005, 07:21:49 PM »
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wahhhh pooja sis!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2005, 07:52:06 PM »
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Thanks Meena!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2005, 03:49:57 PM »
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pooja..dat was amazin.......lekin bohot gehri  soch me daal diya aapne humko
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2005, 04:06:52 PM »
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Mohabbat kar ke dekhi to, mohabbat ko pehchana hai
Wafa bus naam ki hai, be-wafaai ka fasana hai

dis 1's  4 u pooja
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2005, 09:25:23 AM »
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Nice Post ..Awesome Reply and again superb Reply...

" Mohabbat kar ke dekhi to, mohabbat ko pehchana hai
  Wafa bus naam ki hai, be-wafaai ka fasana hai  "
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2005, 04:38:47 PM »
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Shukariyan Sulmul ji!!!!!

Bewafai ke fasaano mai, bas ek wafa ki shamma jalana hai
Tum bewafai ke kisse kahty jao, ki ajj hume khud ko ajmaana hai!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2005, 04:47:51 PM »
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Shukariyan Sulmul ji!!!!!

Bewafai ke fasaano mai, bas ek wafa ki shamma jalana hai
Tum bewafai ke kisse kahty jao, ki ajj hume khud ko ajmaana hai!!!


nice pooja ji,..
zindagi ki udaas raaton me bewafaa teri yaad aati hai.. :cry:
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2005, 05:04:15 PM »
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Apki ek line se shair pura karane ki koshish ki hai>>

zindagi ki udaas raaton me bewafaa teri yaad aati hai..
Jab bhi yaad sulagati hai, ek nashatar sa chubha jati hai....
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2005, 05:19:29 PM »
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Apki ek line se shair pura karane ki koshish ki hai>>

zindagi ki udaas raaton me bewafaa teri yaad aati hai..
Jab bhi yaad sulagati hai, ek nashatar sa chubha jati hai....


yaad teri jab aati hai,dil me ek dard sa hota hai,
baate jab teri yaad aati hai,aankho se aansu girte hai,
q dil lagaya bewafa se,ye soch k ab pachtate hai,
jis lahoo me tera pyaar basa hai us lahu ko ab bahate hai.
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2005, 05:21:52 PM »
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wah pandit ji beautiful!!!!!!!!! esp the last line superbbb!!

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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2005, 05:27:13 PM »
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wah pandit ji beautiful!!!!!!!!! esp the last line superbbb!!

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thanks meena ji... tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2005, 05:28:19 PM »
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ur welcome!

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