dil tuta----------------saloni

by saloni bharani on December 06, 2008, 08:26:34 PM
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Dil tuta to ek aawaj aayi
chir ka dekha to kuch chij nikal aayi
soch kya hoga is khali dil main
lahu sa dokar dekha , to tari tasveer nikal aayi.
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2008, 08:33:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2008, 08:37:34 PM »
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Dil tuta to ek aawaj aayi
chir ka dekha to kuch chij nikal aayi
soch kya hoga is khali dil main
lahu sa dokar dekha , to tari tasveer nikal aayi.


bahut hi kamaal ka likha hai Saloni


HUM DIL MEH USKI TASVIR LAGAYE BAITHEY THEY
BAHUT SAPNEY, KUCH AASHIYAA BANAYE BAITHEY THEY
KYA PATA THA, KYA KHABAR THI,
WOH APNEY DIL MEH KISI AUR KOH SAJAYI BAITHEY THEY



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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2008, 08:42:48 PM »
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Nice lines Saloni
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2008, 08:51:29 PM »
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thanks rajash ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2008, 09:45:49 PM »
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Very nice saloni......
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2008, 07:51:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saloni Ji aur Jasbir Ji


Ek lamha baar baar sataata hai,
Na jaane yeh dil kya chahta hai,
Kaash is lamhe mein woh hamaare saath hote,
Par yeh kaash tou kaash hi ban kar rah jaata hai.
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2008, 06:46:39 PM »
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Dil tuta to ek aawaj aayi
chir kar dekha to kuch chij nikal aayi
soch kya hoga is khali dil main
lahu se dhokar dekha , to teri tasveer nikal aayi.
Applause Admirably good!
Kis ilaaqey ki Urdu/Hindi bolteen hain aap?
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2008, 06:55:48 PM »
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Nice One Jasbir Bhai,.
And Deepti JI,..
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2008, 06:59:16 PM »
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Dil Ka Mere Tootna, Likha Tha Naseeb Mein,.
Unhe Koi Bewafaai Ka Ilzaam Na Do,.

Meri Barbaad Ka Main Hi Zimedaar Hoon "Doston",.
Meri Barbaadi Ka Khissa Unke Naam Na Do,.

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«Reply #10 on: December 07, 2008, 11:19:37 PM »
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bhut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2008, 05:08:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saloni Ji aur Jasbir Ji


Ek lamha baar baar sataata hai,
Na jaane yeh dil kya chahta hai,
Kaash is lamhe mein woh hamaare saath hote,
Par yeh kaash tou kaash hi ban kar rah jaata hai.


Thanks Deepati,


KASH YEH GAR KAASH NA HOTA
UMAR BHAR FIR TERA SAATH HOTA
KAASH TU YU JUDA NA HOTA
KAASH FIR YEH KAASH MAIN SAPNEY SANJOTA
KASH YEH GAR KAASH NA HOTA
KASH YEH GAR KAASH NA HOTA



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«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2008, 05:09:37 PM »
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Nice One Jasbir Bhai,.
And Deepti JI,..


Thanks Jahanasheen


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«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2008, 05:12:12 PM »
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Dil Ka Mere Tootna, Likha Tha Naseeb Mein,.
Unhe Koi Bewafaai Ka Ilzaam Na Do,.

Meri Barbaad Ka Main Hi Zimedaar Hoon "Doston",.
Meri Barbaadi Ka Khissa Unke Naam Na Do,.




MERI TAKDIR UNKEY NAAM SEY LIKHI THI
MERI JINDAGI UNKEY ARMAANOH SEY SILI THI
ABB TAKDIR HI LEKEY WOH CHALEY GAYE
MEHFIL MEH HAMARI JUBAAN TABHI TOH SILI THI



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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2008, 05:36:14 PM »
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MERI TAKDIR UNKEY NAAM SEY LIKHI THI
MERI JINDAGI UNKEY ARMAANOH SEY SILI THI
ABB TAKDIR HI LEKEY WOH CHALEY GAYE
MEHFIL MEH HAMARI JUBAAN TABHI TOH SILI THI



JASBIR SINGH

[b[Nice One Jasbir Bhaijaan,.
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