Ek Ansu....

by manjum on December 27, 2010, 10:14:43 AM
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 ek ansu ankh se kya bah gaya.
jane kya kya is jahan se kah gaya.

Dhund lin thi sab ne apni manzile,
dil bhari mahfil main tanha rah gaya.

jane kitna pyar usse mujhe,
islie dil dard sare sah gaya.

bewafai is kadar ki usne mujhse,
ashq ke shailab main dil bah gaya.

dil ko samjhaya tha na is rah chal,
fir bhi dekho wah gaya dil wah gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 10:19:27 AM »
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gud one manju ji....
luved d last one..
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 10:27:56 AM »
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are ye kya Manjum ji !!
sirf ek hi ansuu ??
bade kanjus ho bhai.
ek hi ansu girate ho .
lekin kamaal ka girate ho.
achha hai..
lage raho--
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 11:30:03 AM »
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Manjum ji bohot achi lines likhi hai aapne ,
bohot umda poetry haii ,lajawaab yakeen karen,,
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2010, 05:43:31 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on December 27, 2010, 10:14:43 AM
ek ansu ankh se kya bah gaya.
jane kya kya is jahan se kah gaya.

Dhund lin thi sab ne apni manzile,
dil bhari mahfil main tanha rah gaya.

jane kitna pyar usse mujhe,
islie dil dard sare sah gaya.

bewafai is kadar ki usne mujhse,
ashq ke shailab main dil bah gaya.

dil ko samjhaya tha na is rah chal,
fir bhi dekho wah gaya dil wah gaya.
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 04:39:02 AM »
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thanks manojji.....

dhanyawad....
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 04:41:46 AM »
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shukriya muzammilji

hosala badate rahen.....
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 04:44:31 AM »
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dhanyawad.... aapko last line pasand aai...


bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 04:57:22 AM »
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shukriya niralaji.....

aapka shukriya..... bahut bahut......
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 05:13:49 AM »
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hayeeeeee......kya baat hai manjum ji..behad khubsurat likha hai aapne...bht khubbb
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 05:21:14 AM »
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shukriya Kasakji....

zindgi sab sikhati hai
wahi to yaese rang dikhati hai..

thanks
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 05:49:31 AM »
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bahut badhiya hai manjum ji..

achhe hyalat achhi koshish or achha feel,..


good one..

lkhte rahiye

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2010, 06:17:20 AM »
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shukriya Abhiji...

aap daad dete rahie....

shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2010, 10:34:39 AM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum JI
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2010, 11:10:33 AM »
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Nice manjum ji...
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