EK SAPNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Arifa on January 23, 2005, 08:07:20 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 03, 2005, 11:19:55 AM »
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Chal aise jaise chalti hain hawaayein,
Phoolon ko khilaayen,baharon ko hansaayen..
Baant le sabke gham ke khushnuma ban jaayen fizaayen..
Issi jahan mein hai dard aur iss dard ki dawaayein…
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Arifa
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«Reply #31 on: February 03, 2005, 02:07:42 PM »
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good thinking i like it


dolly ,ye baat tou sahi hai kay kisi ko khush karna khuda ko khush karna hai, lekin kiya ladka anjanay mein us ladki kay sath kuch gallat nahi kar rha hai . ladke ko tou donoo ka pyar mila ,us ladki kay pass  bhi apna pyar hai .magar is ladki ko kiya mila kiya iska dil nahi chata kay us ko bhi koi sache dil se pyar kare binna kisi garz kay aur uskay pyar mein koi shrik na ho kiya kaho gi tum zaroor batana






mangay se gar milay mohabbat bhi
ek traha se hoti hai woh bhi kheraat



Me v happy that you liked my thinking…its honour for me THANX.N sorry for the delay of my reply….

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Ab jo aapne likha hai….usne sach mein thoda sa soch mein dal diya hai.us ladki ne sachha pyar kiya par usse kuch mila nahi….lekin KHUDA ne kahin naa kahin koi uske liye banaaya hoga…sabr hi sirf ek raasta hai….kehte to kuch aise hain ke shaadi usse karo jo tumse pyaar karta ho…na ki jisse tum pyaar karte ho….ab yeh  baat kitni sach hai ya kisi ki  zindagi mein kitni umeed laa sakti hai yeh to maaloom nahi….par that gurl shud wait for right time….ab aap kya kahengi kuch bataayen....jahan meri soch galat ho woh bhi bataayen......thanx once again.[/quote]



really dolly ,i was waiting for your comments

aap ne khah hai ke us ladki ke liye bhi koi na koi hoga tou ye galt hai kion ke us ladki ne tou isi ladke se pyar kiya hai ab agar woh kisi aor ka intizzar kare tou us ka pyar sacha na hoa na .han!agar woh is baat ka intizzar kare ke ek na ek din is ladke ko is baat ka ehassas ho jaye ke woh jo kuch is ladki ke sath kar rha hai woh galat hai tou is ladki ko apne sabr ka innam mil sakta hai .
aur DOLLY is poem mein, meine jo is ladki ka haal likha hai is se lagta hai ke woh ladki qaymat taak sabr kar sakti hai lekin ksis aur ke liye soch bhi nahi sakti kion sach hai na ?
ab tum kiya khaho gi ?



shayid ye ladki kuch is traha sochti ho ke


ghum ka har war dil par sahna hai
mujh ko apne ghar mein rhana hai
shouq se sath chod de zamana
lekin mujh ko teri nazar mein rhana hai
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pandit
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«Reply #32 on: February 03, 2005, 02:18:46 PM »
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very nice aarifa and dolly ji..
apne apno se bewafai karne se achaa,
is zamaane ko chood dena achaa.
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Arifa
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«Reply #33 on: February 03, 2005, 02:35:59 PM »
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thanks pandit jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiii



chot lag jaye tou kiya hoti hai dil ki halat
ek aaine ko patthar pe gira kar dekho
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«Reply #34 on: February 03, 2005, 05:11:28 PM »
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wow   kya  baat  hai  dolly......arifa  sis  ki .......  bahot  khoob...........  arifa sis......  :lol:
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Arifa
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«Reply #35 on: February 03, 2005, 07:25:03 PM »
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thanks waheed bhai
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pandit
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«Reply #36 on: February 04, 2005, 05:18:07 PM »
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thanks pandit jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiii



chot lag jaye tou kiya hoti hai dil ki halat
ek aaine ko patthar pe gira kar dekho


wah....
very nice,,...
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«Reply #37 on: February 04, 2005, 05:40:52 PM »
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very nice aarifa and dolly ji..
apne apno se bewafai karne se achaa,
is zamaane ko chood dena achaa.


thanx panditji..n.....urs also nice one!!


Teri aankhon ko padkar lagta hai tu humse rooth raha hai,
Teri baton ko sunkar aaj yeh dil toot raha hai,
Kal tak jo humaare saath tha who aaj choot raha hai
Hai!yeh zamaana aaj mera pyaar mujhse loot raha hai…
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«Reply #38 on: February 04, 2005, 05:42:47 PM »
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wow   kya  baat  hai  dolly......arifa  sis  ki .......  bahot  khoob...........  arifa sis......  :lol:


Bahut Bahut Shukriya WAHEEDJI.....!!! Usual Smile


Uske dar par gaye the apni wafaayen lekar,
Laut aaye lekin usko salaamati ki duaayen dekar,
Jamaana ye hansa..kaha mil gayee tumko bhi iss pyaar mein thokar…
Ab besahara hain,sehna hai yeh dard hanskar yaa rokar…
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«Reply #39 on: February 04, 2005, 05:46:06 PM »
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waah arifa n dolly Usual Smile
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«Reply #40 on: February 04, 2005, 05:52:22 PM »
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hello Arifaji.....kaiseen hain aap??

maine aapka reply pada......lekin aisa nahi hota........

aap aisa kaise keh saktin hain ke agar iss ladki ne kisi aur ka saath diya to iska pyaar sachha nahi......dekhiye.....pyar yeh kehta hai jo bhi ho bas uske saath achha ho..Khuda usse har khushi de.....uski har khwahish puri kare.....matlabki uske liye humesha dil duaayen maangta hai....shaadi pyaar ka aakhiri mukaam nahi hai.....

yeh baat iss ladki ko samajhni hi hogi ke ab ladka sirf usska saath de sakta hai...uska sahara..ya jeevan saathi nahi ban sakta....isliye....kuch likhti hoon...


Kyon lagaaye baithe ho yeh aas,
Aayega kabhi who tumhaare paas…
Who nahi ban sakta sahaara,bas marte dam tak dega saath,
Yun tanha zindagi naa guzarkar,thaam le kisi khuda ke bande ka haath…

ur views alwys welcome!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: February 04, 2005, 05:54:10 PM »
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waah arifa n dolly Usual Smile


thank u so much Nishi!!  How r u??....Bahut kam nazar aati ho aajkal?? Usual Smile
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Arifa
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«Reply #42 on: February 05, 2005, 12:08:27 AM »
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hello Arifaji.....kaiseen hain aap??

maine aapka reply pada......lekin aisa nahi hota........

aap aisa kaise keh saktin hain ke agar iss ladki ne kisi aur ka saath diya to iska pyaar sachha nahi......dekhiye.....pyar yeh kehta hai jo bhi ho bas uske saath achha ho..Khuda usse har khushi de.....uski har khwahish puri kare.....matlabki uske liye humesha dil duaayen maangta hai....shaadi pyaar ka aakhiri mukaam nahi hai.....

yeh baat iss ladki ko samajhni hi hogi ke ab ladka sirf usska saath de sakta hai...uska sahara..ya jeevan saathi nahi ban sakta....isliye....kuch likhti hoon...


Kyon lagaaye baithe ho yeh aas,
Aayega kabhi who tumhaare paas…
Who nahi ban sakta sahaara,bas marte dam tak dega saath,
Yun tanha zindagi naa guzarkar,thaam le kisi khuda ke bande ka haath…

ur views alwys welcome!! Usual Smile




HELLO DOLLY, IAM FINE THANKS


NO, my dear dolly ,ek ladki ke liye shadi us ka aakhiri maqam hota hai meri nazar mein tou esa hi hai ab ye har ladki ki kismat hoti hai ke us ko wafa mille ye bewafai magar ek ladki ke liye shadi ke baad kisi aur ke bare mein sochna bhi ghunna hai aur is poem ki ladki bhi kuch is type ki hai ke jis se shadi ki usi se pyar kiya



woh log kion chupke se uter jate hain dil mein
jin logoo se kismat ke sitare nahi milte



ho tere sath umar baser,kash aesa ho
mumkin nahi hai easa magar kash easa ho
dil mein rhahe na judai ka daar kash easa ho
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Arifa
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«Reply #43 on: February 05, 2005, 12:09:09 AM »
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ye sadgi thi meri ye ke chahat thi
ke mein ne khud ko kiya peash dil lagi ke liye
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Arifa
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«Reply #44 on: February 05, 2005, 12:14:24 AM »
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baadal hai aaj nahi tou kal hongaye
barse woh aaj nahi tou kal tou barse gaye
agar hai aaj woh hum se khafa tou kal muskuraye gaye
hai agar aaj un ka dil patthar ka tou kal zaroor pihglega
humare pyar mein hai aakhir mili khuda ki dua
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