<>*Tere bin jeene ka sapna *<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 05, 2010, 07:10:59 PM
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<>*Tere bin jeene ka sapna *<>


Mere hathon ko thaam k jo aj tune mujhe apnaya hai
Mere jweewan me rang suhera tu leke aaya hai

Kho k meri ghani julf k inn andheron me tune
Ek anjana sa ankaha kaise ye sukh paaya hai

Ye dhaani chunar odhake mere sir pe sanam
Tune mujhe aaj apni dulhan banaya hai

Chhuke mere hothon ko apne inn labon se
Mujhe chahut ka hare k sur sikhaya hai

Ab na karma durr mujhe khudse ee sanam
Tere bin jeene ka sapna bhi meri maut leke aaya hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 07:20:06 PM »
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WAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Full romantic............

one word only "KAMAL".................

Relly supreb !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Be happy alwyz & keep smiling
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 07:21:57 PM »
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WAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Full romantic............

one word only "KAMAL".................

Relly supreb !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Be happy alwyz & keep smiling

thnku neelllll....tumne kamaaalllllllll kehke post ki raunak badha di..thnx for ur kamaalllllll re
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 08:03:07 PM »
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ek dum mastammmmmmm hai re.. bahut mast likha hai aapne.. aap jab aisa likhte ho to lagta hai ki haan Kasak likh rahi hain.. kahaan frastu frastu likhte rehte ho aap bhi.. aisa hi likha karo... isse hum bhi kuch aap bhi khush aur padhne waale bhi khush... hai na ...

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hum to aashiq hain tumhaare, aashiqi jeene ke liye karte hain,
tumhaare liye pagal hain hum aur tumhaari adaaon pe marte hain,

na mile tumse kuch pal ke liye to hum to aahen bharte hain,
hum wo pyaase hain jo tumhaari aankhon se pyaar karte hain,

chhooke tumhaare hothon ko hum kamal ke jaise khil jaate hain,
kaali ghani julfon se tumhaare hum subha shaam khela karte hain,

aake kareeb tumhaare tumhe hum apne seene se lagaaya karte hain,
ishaaron ishaaron me tumse dil ki har baat bataaya karte hain,

kabhi lipat ke chunri me tumhaare hum yun madhosh hua karte hain,
ki khoke mohabbat me tumhaare kabhi hum khaamosh hua karte hain,

na karo marne ki baat tum, hum to maut se saanse churaaya karte hain,
jeete hain har lamha hum muskuraake aur zindagi se pyaar karte hain....
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 12:37:31 AM »
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WAh ji wah Kapil kya reply diya re.........

very beautiful ....

Keep going.............

Be happy alwyz ........aise hi reho saab khush ..

ek dum mastammmmmmm hai re.. bahut mast likha hai aapne.. aap jab aisa likhte ho to lagta hai ki haan Kasak likh rahi hain.. kahaan frastu frastu likhte rehte ho aap bhi.. aisa hi likha karo... isse hum bhi kuch aap bhi khush aur padhne waale bhi khush... hai na ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


hum to aashiq hain tumhaare, aashiqi jeene ke liye karte hain,
tumhaare liye pagal hain hum aur tumhaari adaaon pe marte hain,

na mile tumse kuch pal ke liye to hum to aahen bharte hain,
hum wo pyaase hain jo tumhaari aankhon se pyaar karte hain,

chhooke tumhaare hothon ko hum kamal ke jaise khil jaate hain,
kaali ghani julfon se tumhaare hum subha shaam khela karte hain,

aake kareeb tumhaare tumhe hum apne seene se lagaaya karte hain,
ishaaron ishaaron me tumse dil ki har baat bataaya karte hain,

kabhi lipat ke chunri me tumhaare hum yun madhosh hua karte hain,
ki khoke mohabbat me tumhaare kabhi hum khaamosh hua karte hain,

na karo marne ki baat tum, hum to maut se saanse churaaya karte hain,
jeete hain har lamha hum muskuraake aur zindagi se pyaar karte hain....
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2010, 12:42:44 AM »
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thank you so much Neel ji...!!!



WAh ji wah Kapil kya reply diya re.........

very beautiful ....

Keep going.............

Be happy alwyz ........aise hi reho saab khush ..

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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2010, 02:31:35 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK... DIL KI JI......


TERE SAATH JEENE KA SAPNA TO JEENA LAGTA HAI
PAR "TERE BIN JEENE KA SAPNA" TO MARNA LAGTA HAI.....
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2010, 03:24:49 PM »
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<>*Tere bin jeene ka sapna *<>


Mere hathon ko thaam k jo aj tune mujhe apnaya hai
Mere jweewan me rang suhera tu leke aaya hai

Kho k meri ghani julf k inn andheron me tune
Ek anjana sa ankaha kaise ye sukh paaya hai

Ye dhaani chunar odhake mere sir pe sanam
Tune mujhe aaj apni dulhan banaya hai

Chhuke mere hothon ko apne inn labon se
Mujhe chahut ka hare k sur sikhaya hai

Ab na karma durr mujhe khudse ee sanam
Tere bin jeene ka sapna bhi meri maut leke aaya hai…!!!

A wonderful presentation
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2010, 04:07:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK... DIL KI JI......


TERE SAATH JEENE KA SAPNA TO JEENA LAGTA HAI
PAR "TERE BIN JEENE KA SAPNA" TO MARNA LAGTA HAI.....
A wonderful presentation

thnx sir ji and cara ji for appreciating my work...
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2010, 06:01:18 AM »
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wah anu jiii bahut khoob likha he ...

bahut bahut mast laga..

khaskar last wali lines...

or kapil bhaiii apne bhi bahut mast reply diyela he ...anu ji koo..lage rehene ka bhiduuuu~
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2010, 06:29:00 AM »
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Tere bin jeene ka sapna bhee na dekhna chahu mein
Tujh sang-sang he har pal jeevan ka beetana chahu mein



<>*Tere bin jeene ka sapna *<>


Mere hathon ko thaam k jo aj tune mujhe apnaya hai
Mere jweewan me rang suhera tu leke aaya hai

Kho k meri ghani julf k inn andheron me tune
Ek anjana sa ankaha kaise ye sukh paaya hai

Ye dhaani chunar odhake mere sir pe sanam
Tune mujhe aaj apni dulhan banaya hai

Chhuke mere hothon ko apne inn labon se
Mujhe chahut ka hare k sur sikhaya hai

Ab na karma durr mujhe khudse ee sanam
Tere bin jeene ka sapna bhi meri maut leke aaya hai…!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2010, 09:22:38 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

wah anu jiii bahut khoob likha he ...

bahut bahut mast laga..

khaskar last wali lines...

or kapil bhaiii apne bhi bahut mast reply diyela he ...anu ji koo..lage rehene ka bhiduuuu~
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2013, 03:02:51 PM »
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Usne Chaha To Chahto Ki Hado Se Badh Kar....

Kahti Thi Hath Na Chorna Toofano Se Dar Kar...

Fir Khud Hi Tod Diya Wo Talluq Jindagi Ke Ek Mod Par...

Aaj Maine Pucha To Kahti Hai Wo Lamha Tha Jo
Gujar Gaya Kinaro Ko Tod Kar........

Khud Hi Ro Pari Wo Jindagi Ke Ek Mod Par....

Or Kah Gai Kisi Aur Ke mat ho jana Mujhe Bhool Kar.....

Main Hasrat Se Dekhta Raha Use Apne Hatho Ko Jod Kar...

Or Wo Chal Padi Meri Wafao Ko Chor Kar....
Magar Main Karunga Intzaar Un Lamhaat Ko Tham Kar...

Kabhi To Hoga Use Bhi Ye Ehsaas Kisi Ne Chaha Tha Use
Duniya Ko Chor Kar....
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2013, 02:38:46 AM »
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Usne Chaha To Chahto Ki Hado Se Badh Kar....

Kahti Thi Hath Na Chorna Toofano Se Dar Kar...

Fir Khud Hi Tod Diya Wo Talluq Jindagi Ke Ek Mod Par...

Aaj Maine Pucha To Kahti Hai Wo Lamha Tha Jo
Gujar Gaya Kinaro Ko Tod Kar........

Khud Hi Ro Pari Wo Jindagi Ke Ek Mod Par....

Or Kah Gai Kisi Aur Ke mat ho jana Mujhe Bhool Kar.....

Main Hasrat Se Dekhta Raha Use Apne Hatho Ko Jod Kar...

Or Wo Chal Padi Meri Wafao Ko Chor Kar....
Magar Main Karunga Intzaar Un Lamhaat Ko Tham Kar...

Kabhi To Hoga Use Bhi Ye Ehsaas Kisi Ne Chaha Tha Use
Duniya Ko Chor Kar....

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh anuj ji bahot hi khubsurat peshkash maza aagaya padhkar.. dil k ehsaason ko chhuti hui peshkash rahi aapki... keep writing.....
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2013, 02:10:16 PM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh anuj ji bahot hi khubsurat peshkash maza aagaya padhkar.. dil k ehsaason ko chhuti hui peshkash rahi aapki... keep writing.....
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