ek toota hua dil aur bhi toot gaya

by Lovely-Prince on December 10, 2014, 01:36:11 PM
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Ek Kasak Jo Lafzo’n Ki Aagosh Me Sisak Rahi Thi,,,
Ek Dua Jo Door Arsh Pe Bhatak Rahi Thi,,,

Wo Dua Jo Tuutey Dil Sy Nikal Rhi Thi,,,
Wo Dua Jo 2 Labo’n Pe Machal Rahi Thi,,,

Kaash !!! Ek Shaam Wo Laut Aaye,,,
Ya Kaash !!! Wo Shaam Laut Aaye,,,

Is Dil Ne Bohat Usay Chaha Tha,,,
Hum Ne Rab Sy Bas Usy Hi Maanga Tha,,,

Pr Meri Dua Tou Kahin Arsh Pe Hi Kho Gai,,,
Aur Phr Taqdeer B Andhera Aurh k So Gai,,,

Aur Phir Zabt Ka Daaman Hum Sy Chooth Gaya,,,
Ek Toota Hua Dil Aur Bhi Toot Gaya …!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2014, 03:42:42 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2014, 07:30:43 PM »
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kya khoob kha...toota hua dil aur bhi toot gya.....
har alfaaz behtrin....har lafj umda....dil ko chhoo gyi aapki ye nazm.....dil k dard ko bakhubi alfazon ka zama pehnaya... bahut hi khoob...behtrin....dard, mohabbat,dua,tadap.....chand lafjon mein sab byaan kar diya....bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2014, 09:51:31 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2014, 08:05:05 AM »
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bhut hi aacha likha h lovely prince ji magar aap uska naam bhi likhe jiski ye poem hai..aapne to naam bhi mention nai kiya,,,ki kisi poem hai ye.......
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