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Milney Julney Walon Par Sab Raaz Hamry Kholo Gey
Hum Ko Yeh Malom Na Tha Tum Bhi Aisa Bolo Gye
Hum Ney Tum Ko Apna Samjha Laykin yeh Malom Na tha
Pyar bhary Jevan Main ik Din zehar bhi Tum Gholo Gey
Mujh Ko Yh Malom Na Tha Jis Din Hoga mera Katal
Aus Din Mery Khoon Sey Yaroon Tum bhi Holi Kheylogy
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2004, 05:50:21 AM » |
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Very nice, Sadiqa ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2004, 06:11:51 PM » |
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Wow! wow!! Sadiqa Ji!! Bahut Khoobsoorat Alfaaz hain!!!
Bahut Achchha Likha hai Aapne!
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2004, 01:58:20 AM » |
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Nice JAWED!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2004, 10:26:18 AM » |
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sharmaarunkumar ,immi, pooja ....THNKX FRIENDS...!!!
SEHRA MAIN AKY BHI MUJHY KO THIKANA NA MILA
GHUM KO BHULANY KA KOI BAHANA NA MILA
DIL TARSY JISMY PYAR KO KIA SAMJHON US SANSAR KO
AIK JEETI BAZI HARKY MAIN DHONHON BICHRY YAR KO
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2004, 01:34:59 PM » |
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Nice sadiqa Jawed!! ji!
Khud ka pata Mile na Khabar Yaar ki Mile!
Dushman ko bhi Na aisi Sazaa Pyaar ki Mile!
Door Nigaahon se Aansoo Bahaata hai Koi!
Kaise Na Jaaun main Mujhko Bulaata Hai Koi!
(NOT MINE)
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2004, 12:18:31 PM » |
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GOOD ONE , ARUN KUMAR....
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2004, 12:47:00 PM » |
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Shukriya Sadiqa ji!
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2004, 01:02:02 PM » |
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Great Sadiqa....
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Mujh Ko Yh Malom Na Tha Jis Din Hoga mera Katal
Aus Din Mery Khoon Sey Yaroon Tum bhi Holi Kheylogy
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Good reminder..
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Khud ka pata Mile na Khabar Yaar ki Mile!
Dushman ko bhi Na aisi Sazaa Pyaar ki Mile!
Door Nigaahon se Aansoo Bahaata hai Koi!
Kaise Na Jaaun main Mujhko Bulaata Hai Koi!
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Great..
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2004, 01:54:41 PM » |
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HUM BOHAT DORE NIKAL AY HAIN CHALTY CHALTY
AB TEHAR JAEN KAHIN SHAM K DHALTY DHALTY
MERY ANDER K ANDHERON KI HOTI SI CHUBHAN
GEHRY ZAKHM MAIN DHAL JAY GI PALTY PALTY
AB TEHAR JAIN KAHIN SHAM K DHALTY DHALTY
GARAM SEHRA MA TUJHY DHONDON KAHAN JANY JAHAN
HO CHALY PAON BHI ADI YAHAN JALTY JALTY
RAAT K BAD SEHAR HOGI MAGAR KIS K LIYH ?
HUM SHAYED NA RAHIN RAT K DHALTY DHALTY
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2004, 02:06:26 PM » |
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Well Said Sadiqa..
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RAAT K BAD SEHAR HOGI MAGAR KIS K LIYH ?
HUM SHAYED NA RAHIN RAT K DHALTY DHALTY
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Kis K Liya..
Great Well said..
Good....
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2004, 02:14:45 PM » |
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BHED MAIN ZAMANY KI.........
UMAR BHAR KI CHAHAT KO ASRA NAHI MILTA
KHAMSHI K WAQFOON MAIN
BAT TOTE JATI HAI
AWR SIRA NAHI MILTA
MAZRET K LAFZON KO ROSHNI NAHI MILTI
PHIR KABHI LAZAT PIZARAI NAHI MILTI
PHOOL RANG O WADON KI
MANZILAIN SUKADTI HAIN
RAH LADNY LAGTI HAI
BEY RUKHI KY GARY SY
BY DIL KI MITI SY
FASLY KI ENTOON SY AIENT JUDNY LAGTI HAI
KHAK UDNY LAGTI HAI
KHUWAB TOTE JATY HAIN
WAHIMON KY SAY SY
UMAR BHAR KI MOHABAT KO
PAL BHAR MAIN TOTE JATI HAI
AIK ZARA SI RANJISH SY
BHED MAIN ZAMANYKI
HATH CHOTE JATY HAIN
SATH CHOTE JATY HAIN
KHUWAB TOTE JATY HAIN...
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2004, 02:22:20 PM » |
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THNKX FOR APRICIATING QUTUBDIN..
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2004, 02:22:53 PM » |
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THNKX FOR APRICIATING QUTUBDIN..
BHER MAIN ZAMANY KI
HATH CHOTE BHI JATY HAIN
DAST DRAZ LEHJON MAIN
SILWATAIN SI PADTI HAIN
AK ZARA SI RANJISH MAIN
SHAK KI ZARD TEHNI PAR
PHOOL BAD GUMANI K
AS TARHAN SI KHILTY HAIN
ZINDAGI SY PYARY BHI
AJNABI SY LAGTY HAIN
GHAIR BAN K MILTY HAIN
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SADIQA just you can call me Qutub, as you are not able to write my full name which is Qutubuddin... you had eaten "ud" .. ..  Great well said again.. " PHOOL BAD GUMANI K AS TARHAN SI KHILTY HAIN ZINDAGI SY PYARY BHI AJNABI SY LAGTY HAIN GHAIR BAN K MILTY HAIN " Khudaa Karay kaa Hamay GUMAA Tu hoo... Par BADGUMAANEE Na hoo.. GUMAA Tu ho Key Wohbee humsay payaar kartay hai... BADGUMAANEE Na hoo Kee Woh Humpay martay nahee... " Ques.. |
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