<>*ilzaam e bewafai*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 26, 2010, 11:08:18 AM
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<>*ilzaam e bewafai*<>

Mere sanam mere sajan
tujhse aur kya chahun main

Tune diya hai itna k
ab tujhse aur kya paun main

Teri har saans pe mera haq hai
teri dhadkano me ab gungunaun main

Tere lahu ki har bund me
ab to sirf nazar aaun main

Jaise phulon me khushbu basi
waise tujhme bas jaun main

Ab tak kyun ye dard e judai
iss tarah sehti jaun main

Kab mujhe lene aaoge yahaan
isi intezar me palkein bichaun main

Sau ilzaam duniya k
sehti rahti chup chap hun main

Lekin ye ilzaam e bawafai
seh nahin ab paun main...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 11:18:06 AM »
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Wah Ji Wah
Kamaal ki peshkash hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 11:21:52 AM »
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ab ye iljaam tujhe aur na sehna hoga
mai bhi aaonga jamane ko bhi kahna hoga
kabhi na ruth jana tum kahin mujhe e- mere hamnawan
jindagi bhar ka sath hai sath me rehna hoga
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 11:24:02 AM »
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diiiiiiiiiiii bhut acha likha hai aap ne kamal kar diya

kahan se laty ho itne jajbaat itne alfaz aur itni shayri

thoda sa hamen b bata do us jagah ka naam ham b le aayegy
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2010, 11:40:03 AM »
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hmm is bar kuchh pm par batana padega~

poem is innocently good ..nice touching of words~
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2010, 11:44:09 AM »
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fir kuch gadbad kar di maine abhi ji......

ufffffff........jaldi batao ji......

abhi sahi kar dungi...
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 12:38:47 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai aapne Kasak Ji, But The word khuda in this line made me down, Khuda Ki jagah koi le nahi sakta u may edit this word, warna gunaa hoga humpe to conclude our  lover with god
please dont mind,
i read ur poem dilse i have given comments also from dilse

thank u azeem


Mere sanam mere khuda
tujhse aur kya chahun main
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 12:43:03 PM »
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i have made the correction md Azeem ji......

sorry if my words have hurted ur feelings....

i m sorry dil se...dint thought in this way...
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 01:11:00 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 26, 2010, 12:43:03 PM
i have made the correction md Azeem ji......

sorry if my words have hurted ur feelings....

i m sorry dil se...dint thought in this way...

Its Ok sis

waise u write good
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2010, 06:31:14 AM »
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bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Kasak ji,.... bahut achche...

 Applause Applause Applause

tumhaare intezaar me, baadal bhi ruke huye hain,
aa bhi jao ab to tum, ye barasne ko tayyar hain,

tumhaare intezar me, kaliyaan bhi ruki hui hain,
aa bhi jao ab to tum, ye khilne ko tayyar hain,

tumhaare intezaar me, raahi bhi ruka hua hai,
aa bhi jao ab to tum, ye chalne ko tayyar hai,

tumhaare intezaar me, shaam bhi ruka hua hai,
aa bhi jao ab to tum, ye dhalne ko tayyar hai,

tumhaare intezaar me, hain ghadiya lambi ho gayi,
tumhaare intezaar me, din bhi lage hai saal sa,

tumhaare intezaar me, haal hai behaal sa,
tumhaare intezaar me, dil me hai bhoochaal sa,

tumhare intezaar me, saanse bhi ruki hui hain,
tumhaare intezaar me, dil me hai ek aas sa,

aa bhi jao ab to tum, ki tumse mulaqaaat ho,
khatam intezaar ho, khatam kaali raat ho...
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2010, 07:01:01 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

lo aagai main ab kaho kya kehna hai
khilao kaliyon ko jinhe mere liye khilna hai

barsao ye baadal jo mere liye bechain hain
mehkao phulon ko jinme meri mahek bharna hai

bhar do rang mere iss indra dhanush me
aur iss shaam ko bhi ab rangeen tumhe karna hai

kehdo raahi se wo chal pade manzil ki taraf
mujhe unki raah me palkein bichana hai

sambhalo dil ki dhadkanno ko jinme aaya bhuchal hai
ab to unme hume aatm vishwas naya bharna hai

ye ghadiyan yunhi beet jayengi zindagi ki
keh do tumhe humse aaj jo bhi kuch kehna hai

ho gai mulakaat ab to kaho hai kya baat
k ab hume fir apne ghar wapas jana hai....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2010, 07:03:28 AM »
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bhut khooooooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbb

aap dono ko to kawali ki best jodi ghoshit kar dena chaiye
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2010, 07:07:55 AM »
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shukriya rahul mastam compliment diya tumne......

kapil ji chalo kawaali me chalen.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2010, 07:14:32 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 27, 2010, 07:07:55 AM
shukriya rahul mastam compliment diya tumne......

kapil ji chalo kawaali me chalen.....

hammmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
masatam masatm

di ek baat bataon

aaj na mai ek kavita likh raha hu
diiiiiii ke liye aur pata hai wo di koun hai
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2010, 07:16:28 AM »
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kaun hai batao zara
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