intjar ............................Rajan Kondal

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Mein tnaha kisi mod par khada rehta hoon,
 aur karta rehta hoon,
 intjar ush befwa ka,
Jis naya humy jena sikhaia,
Kay hoti hai jindagi,
Jindagi ka matlaw btaya,
Aur fer ban kar jindagi humari,
Pta nahi keo,
Chali gai dur humari jindagi say,
Hum ko pal bhar kay ,
Liya hassa kar,
Umar bhar kay liya rulay ,
Par bho jaty jaty be hum ko
Keh gai,
Esh jindagi ka etbar maat karna,
Tu kisi say itna payar maat karna,
Ki akhir jina musakil ho, jay ,
Har kisi ko apnana mager kisi ko apni adat mat bnana,
Par ab kon samjay un ko,
Ki ab bhut der ho chuki hai,
Hum ko to ap say dillagi ho chuki hai,
Mein tnaha kisi mod par khada rehta hoon,
 aur karta rehta hoon,
 intjar ush befwa ka,
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2013, 03:50:54 AM »
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Mein tnaha kisi mod par khada rehta hoon,
 aur karta rehta hoon,
 intjar ush befwa ka,
Jis naya humy jena sikhaia,
Kay hoti hai jindagi,
Jindagi ka matlaw btaya,
Aur fer ban kar jindagi humari,
Pta nahi keo,
Chali gai dur humari jindagi say,
Hum ko pal bhar kay ,
Liya hassa kar,
Umar bhar kay liya rulay ,
Par bho jaty jaty be hum ko
Keh gai,
Esh jindagi ka etbar maat karna,
Tu kisi say itna payar maat karna,
Ki akhir jina musakil ho, jay ,
Har kisi ko apnana mager kisi ko apni adat mat bnana,
Par ab kon samjay un ko,
Ki ab bhut der ho chuki hai,
Hum ko to ap say dillagi ho chuki hai,
Mein tnaha kisi mod par khada rehta hoon,
 aur karta rehta hoon,
 intjar ush befwa ka,
by-Rajan kondal

rajan bahut khoob soorat poem hai padhne mein dikkat hui kyon ki shayad tumhaari urdu achi nahin hai per behtreen ehsaas ka mozaahera kiya hai tum ne and very touching main ek rau deti hoon tumhein........well said ji............ icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2013, 07:24:10 AM »
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shandaar, bahot achey Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2013, 08:45:01 AM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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bahut khub bahut hee achhi kavita.. dheorn daad o mubarak baad rajan ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2013, 11:44:02 AM »
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bohut shandaar bohut umda
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Waaaaaaaaaaah rajan ji. badi hi achchi peshkash rahi. dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2013, 01:55:36 PM »
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very nice poem
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2013, 09:48:00 PM »
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bhut bhut shukaria ap sabi ka ap ko meri kavita etni achi lagi umid karta hu ap yu he agy be hosla bdaty  rahy gay thanku all my dear buddies
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bahut bahut khoob rajan ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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