JHOOM RAHE THE MAYYAT ME MERI..

by dewanadil on June 14, 2007, 06:13:21 PM
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woh aise jhoom rahe the sajh dhajkar mayyat me meri,
jaise barso se tha unhe intezar jashn manane ka..
unke dil me chhupi woh bekharari to dekho,
poochhte hain sabse k kya waqt nahi hua inhe dafnane ka..
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2007, 10:19:23 PM »
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uffff kaya likh hai!! very nice.. last line pad kar to ek pal ko jaise sab thum gaya!!! Good job Dewanadil ji!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2007, 11:13:23 AM »
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thanx poojaji..

Muhabbat ke ilawa bhi kai kaam hote hain...
duniya mein paane ko aur bhi inaam hote hain...
karni ho muhabbat to zara sambhal kar karna...
har neeki par ashiq badnaam hote hain...
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2007, 12:35:31 PM »
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woh aise jhoom rahe the sajh dhajkar mayyat me meri,
jaise barso se tha unhe intezar jashn manane ka..
unke dil me chhupi woh bekharari to dekho,
poochhte hain sabse k kya waqt nahi hua inhe dafnane ka..



Really its very touching...
Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne Dewanadil... =D> =D>

Keep Writing... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2007, 01:45:41 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Deewaana Dil,,.
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2007, 01:49:12 PM »
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Us Bewafaa Ki Zaat Pe Mujhko Hai Ye Gilaa,..
Sunke Bhi Meri Maut Ka Aaya Na Bewafaa,..
Marke Bhi Uske Waaste Apni To Hai Duaa,..
Jisne Mitaa Diya Mujhe Wo Khush Rahe Sada,..

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2007, 06:16:53 PM »
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i :razz: ts reaaly very touchy........
gud work
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2007, 09:37:48 PM »
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nice dewanadil ji and jaanasheen
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2007, 02:55:43 PM »
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shukriya shikha,jaanasheen,lf n poojaji...!!


Nahi tik payega hum ye jaante hain,
phir kyon hawa k rubaru apna diya jalaye baitthe hain..

woh to hai aasmaan ka chaand woh wahi rahega,
phir kyon uspar hum nazar lagaye baitthe hain...

phoolon ki bhi bus do din ki khushbu hoti hai,
phir kyon hum apna gul posh sajaye baitthe hain...

khabar to hai hame k kisi ko mukammal jahan nahi milta,
phir kyon hum sanam ki aas lagaye baitthe hain..
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2007, 09:56:23 PM »
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Wah ! wah ! wah ! =D> =D> =D>

Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2007, 06:20:11 AM »
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shukriya rajbirji..
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Karo dosti aisi ki "Thanks or Sorry" words baimaan lage,

Magar nibhao dosti aisi ki dost ko chodna mushkil
or duniya chodna aasan lage...,From:- Rafiq S
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2011, 10:30:54 AM »
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Quote from: dewanadil on June 14, 2007, 06:13:21 PM
woh aise jhoom rahe the sajh dhajkar mayyat me meri,
jaise barso se tha unhe intezar jashn manane ka..
unke dil me chhupi woh bekharari to dekho,
poochhte hain sabse k kya waqt nahi hua inhe dafnane ka..


bahut khoob...............!
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2011, 10:33:39 AM »
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woh aise jhoom rahe the sajh dhajkar mayyat me meri,
jaise barso se tha unhe intezar jashn manane ka..
unke dil me chhupi woh bekharari to dekho,
poochhte hain sabse k kya waqt nahi hua inhe dafnane ka..

Bahut Khooooob!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2012, 11:09:43 AM »
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Quote from: dewanadil on June 14, 2007, 06:13:21 PM
woh aise jhoom rahe the sajh dhajkar mayyat me meri,
jaise barso se tha unhe intezar jashn manane ka..
unke dil me chhupi woh bekharari to dekho,
poochhte hain sabse k kya waqt nahi hua inhe dafnane ka..

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