Kabhi tum kitabon mein kuchli hui koi titli jo dekho ...

by tamanna_me on February 15, 2010, 06:08:09 PM
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Kabhi tum kitabon mein kuchli hui koi titli jo dekho
To ye jaan lena...!
Mujhe aasma“n aur zamee“n ne kuchal kar
Tumhari kitabon mein titli ki soorat baqa bakhsh di hai

Kabhi phool toota hua koi pao
To ye jaan lena...!
Mujhe Mere andar ne khud tor kar
Tere qadmon mein naqsh-e-wafa kar diya hai

Kabhi koi saagar umadta jo dekho
To ye jaan lena...!
Ye mere hi aansu hain jo ab samandar mein toofa“n baney hain

Kabhi phool,titli,samandar kinarey
Guzarte huye tere qadmon ko thaamey
To ye jaan lena...!
Ye main hoon jo thak kar yahan agaya hoon
Hamarey liye aise din bhi likhe they
Ke jin mein ana ne fana k safar mein
Kyi dard jhelay
Kyi roop dharey
Kabhi phool titli,samandar kinarey
Kabhi rang khushbu,ujala sitarey
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2010, 06:14:35 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2010, 06:16:06 PM »
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thx :D
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2010, 06:36:46 PM »
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Wah wah Tamanna ji bahut achhi tarah dil ki kaifiyat ko numaaya kiya hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2010, 06:41:23 PM »
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bohut shukriyaa Riyaaz ...

Shab-e-Tanhai

Usey Kehna

Humari Neend Louta Dey

K Uski Yaad Main

Bey-Hadh Aziyat Hain

Ya Apna Naqsh Dho Jayee

Ya Phir

Merii Hi Ho Jaye... !!
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2010, 03:52:09 PM »
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great creation Tamanna ji,bahut hi khoob. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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