~~~Katil Bana Diya~~~

by Sammual on June 03, 2008, 12:19:53 PM
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syednaami
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2008, 08:57:58 PM »
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Tu payr men mar kar jeeti hai, -
Dard hazaron sahti rahti hai, -
Par kahne se kyun darti hai, -
Bas chhup chhup kar roti rahti hai. -


(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2008, 01:47:03 AM »
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Tu payr men mar kar jeeti hai, -
Dard hazaron sahti rahti hai, -
Par kahne se kyun darti hai, -
Bas chhup chhup kar roti rahti hai. -


(Syed Naami)


        u dnt kno how true these 4 lines reli r............

      Shayad Mar Kai Hi Jeena Merai Naseeb Mein Tha,
       Dard Hazaron Sehna Shayad Meri Kismaat Mein Tha,
        Kayun Kai Koy Nahin Samajh Payenga Merai Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
         Kayun Kai Koy Nahin Samajh Payenga Merai Chhup Chhup Kai Roohnai Ki Waja, Issi Liyai Humara Chup Rehna Hi Teek Hai......
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Sonia01
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«Reply #17 on: June 08, 2008, 02:05:07 AM »
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Woh chali gayi hamare armano ka katal karke.
apne dil se jazbatoon ko khatam karke.
kyun kiya tha usne pyar.
aggar use jana hi tha hamain khatam karke.

bahut acche... 

Kiya hai qatal hame, haal-e-dil kya sunaye
Her koyi toh is pyar ke aag se jalta nazar aata hai
Humne to dil se pyar kiya, wafa wo na kar saka
Her dil pyar ke aag main jale jaa rahe hai..


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syednaami
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«Reply #18 on: June 08, 2008, 07:57:47 AM »
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        u dnt kno how true these 4 lines reli r............

      Shayad Mar Kai Hi Jeena Merai Naseeb Mein Tha,
       Dard Hazaron Sehna Shayad Meri Kismaat Mein Tha,
        Kayun Kai Koy Nahin Samajh Payenga Merai Iss Dil Ki Halaat,
         Kayun Kai Koy Nahin Samajh Payenga Merai Chhup Chhup Kai Roohnai Ki Waja, Issi Liyai Humara Chup Rehna Hi Teek Hai......


Zah-e-naseeb aisa likha maine...

Tumhare andar jo aag jal rahi hai, -
Shayad kissi ko jalaane ka intazaar kar rahi hai, -
Bujhado isko qabl-e-barbadi-ye-shahr-e-ghaafil, -
Thama do aag ko gar ho sake na kuchh haasil. -


(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #19 on: June 08, 2008, 03:16:11 PM »
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Zah-e-naseeb aisa likha maine...

Tumhare andar jo aag jal rahi hai, -
Shayad kissi ko jalaane ka intazaar kar rahi hai, -
Bujhado isko qabl-e-barbadi-ye-shahr-e-ghaafil, -
Thama do aag ko gar ho sake na kuchh haasil. -


(Syed Naami)

  wow......amazing.......

        Har Subah Bhooja Dehthi Hoon Main Iss Agh Koh,
         Har Shaam Koy Pir Se Jala Dehtha Hai Iss Agh Koh,
          Intazaar Kar Rahin Hoon Main Uss Din Ka,
            Jab Koy Leh Jayai Ga Mujko Kissi Or Hi Dhoonya Mein.....
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syednaami
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«Reply #20 on: June 08, 2008, 04:37:31 PM »
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Super Sabah, Sonia01 aap ne bhi achha likha hai.. very nice...

Jalaana bujhaana dil ki aag ka ab to rok lo, -
Jo kar gaya khoon tere dil ka ab dilse nikal do, -
Bewafa jo thhahra uske muntazir kyun kar raho, -
Khud hi nayi duniya ke ab sampne tum saja lo. -

         

(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #21 on: June 08, 2008, 07:16:59 PM »
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Super Sabah, Sonia01 aap ne bhi achha likha hai.. very nice...

Jalaana bujhaana dil ki aag ka ab to rok lo, -
Jo kar gaya khoon tere dil ka ab dilse nikal do, -
Bewafa jo thhahra uske muntazir kyun kar raho, -
Khud hi nayi duniya ke ab sampne tum saja lo. -

        

(Syed Naami)

    Thanks......great reply.........

        Yahin Tho Meri BadKismathi Hai Kai Chaah Kar Bhi Abb Iss Agh Koh Main Rokh Nahin Sakthi,
      Kithni Bhar Koshish Ki Thi Maine Appni Koy Or Hi Dhoonya Bana Loh, Magar Har Bhar Meri Kismaat Ussi Ki Or Mujko Leh Jathi Hai, Abb Merai Naseeb Hi Aise Hai Tho Main Kaya Karo.......
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syednaami
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«Reply #22 on: June 08, 2008, 07:35:47 PM »
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Wow... Superb entry, Sabah bibi... So cute...

Khush qismati maano ki bach gaye, -
Aag ke darya men doobne se, -
Dil toota par jaan to baqi hai, -
Zindagi hai banao dost tum zara sache. -


(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #23 on: June 08, 2008, 07:46:00 PM »
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Wow... Superb entry, Sabah bibi... So cute...

Khush qismati maano ki bach gaye, -
Aag ke darya men doobne se, -
Dil toota par jaan to baqi hai, -
Zindagi hai banao dost tum zara sache. -


(Syed Naami)

         thanks..........very nice reply......
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syednaami
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«Reply #24 on: June 08, 2008, 07:50:56 PM »
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Next time waiting for your reply too... Sabah bibi...
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palkhi
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«Reply #25 on: June 08, 2008, 08:27:52 PM »
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Gosh Koy Aisi Jagha Hothi Iss Dhoonya Mein Jahan Main Jaa Kai Rooh Sakhoon,
Gosh Koy Aisa Hotha Jisski Bahoon Mein Sar Rakh Hai Mein Rooh Sakoon,
Gosh Koy Aisi Jagha Hothi Jahan Mein Hamesha Kai Liyai Koh Jao,
Gosh Koy Aisa Hotha Jisski Baan Kai Pir Kabhi Na Uss Katil Koh Yaad Karo..........
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syednaami
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«Reply #26 on: June 09, 2008, 02:11:49 PM »
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Straight from the heart Sabah... Good one...


Mere aashiyaane men aajao aur usse ghar banaalo, -
Mere baanhon men lipat jao aur jee bhar ke ro lo, -
Mere jeevan se jud jao aur har khushi baant lo, -
Mere dil men sama jao aur apna mujhe bhi bana lo, -


(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #27 on: June 09, 2008, 05:51:04 PM »
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Straight from the heart Sabah... Good one...


Mere aashiyaane men aajao aur usse ghar banaalo, -
Mere baanhon men lipat jao aur jee bhar ke ro lo, -
Mere jeevan se jud jao aur har khushi baant lo, -
Mere dil men sama jao aur apna mujhe bhi bana lo, -


(Syed Naami)

     Thanks......Wow...amazing reply.....

         Mera Naseeb Mein Tho Hai Kissi Or Ka Hi Ghar,
           Ghar Ho Kai Bhi Usko Main Appna Ghar Na Keh La Sakongi, Magar Hogi Bilkul Akeli Wahan Main, Shayad Nahin Hai Merai Naseeb Main Koy Aisa Kandha Jiss Pai Sar Rakh Kai Main Rooh Sakon, Shayad Meri Kismaat Mein Sirf Dard Hi Likhai Hai, Shayad Akelai Sab Kuch Sehna Hi Mera Naseeb Hai......
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: June 10, 2008, 01:28:15 PM »
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Oh no... very sad...

Kya naseeb pe chhodoge khud ko khabar nahin, -
Apni qismat pe lagta hai tumko yaqeen nahin, -
Dard sahna hi hai to kissi ko apna to bana lo, -
Is tarah to khud ki zindagi jee sakoge nahin, -


(Syed Naami)
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palkhi
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«Reply #29 on: June 10, 2008, 07:39:43 PM »
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..........

        Jiss Ki Kismaat or Naseeb Nai Ajj Thak Sirf Dard Hi Diyai Hai Un Pai Kaise Kar Leh Woh Yaqeen,
Kissi Koh Appna Banane Se Dar Lagtha Hai Mujko,
Kissi Pai Aithbar Karne Se Dar Lagtha Hai Mujko,
Jahan Appne Hothai Huai Bhi Khud Koh Akela Pathi Hoon Main, Wahan Akelai Ho Janne Se Kaya Farak Padega,
Nahin Kissi Koh Mujko Appna Banana, Woh Bhi Agar Thor Deh Mera Dil Tho Main Jithai Ji Hi Shayad Maar Jao Gi.....
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