~~~Katil Bana Diya~~~

by Sammual on June 03, 2008, 12:19:53 PM
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«Reply #45 on: June 12, 2008, 05:32:40 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 12, 2008, 05:30:56 PM
Thank you Pooja Saahiba and Sonia01 jee...
Kuchh to qadar karne waale mile hamen...

Kuch kyu.... bahut hai aapka likha padne ko aur qadar karne ko jee...
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«Reply #46 on: June 12, 2008, 06:14:02 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on June 12, 2008, 04:07:39 PM
Both Syed Jee and Palkhi .... good going  Applause

      Thankss soooooooo much Di!!!...........

Quote from: Pooja on June 12, 2008, 04:14:33 PM
wah good job Palkhi and Sami!!!

      Teinku Di!!!..........
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palkhi
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«Reply #47 on: June 12, 2008, 06:51:11 PM »
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SYed Ji......appne reply nahin ki.......im waiting.......
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«Reply #48 on: June 12, 2008, 08:28:27 PM »
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Quote from: palkhi on June 12, 2008, 06:51:11 PM
SYed Ji......appne reply nahin ki.......im waiting.......

Reply complete kia to power down... saari mahnat paani main... uffffff....
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«Reply #49 on: June 12, 2008, 08:31:02 PM »
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oh im srry......tho app word mein likh kai save kar liya kare har 2 minute baad........

     waiting..........
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«Reply #50 on: June 12, 2008, 08:53:58 PM »
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Quote from: palkhi on June 12, 2008, 03:57:46 PM
    Teinku.....hehehehe.....nice reply.... tongue3

        Katil Bana Tha Tho Hum Inkaar Hi Kar Dehthai Thai,
    Iqraar Karna Tha Tho Hum Izhaar Kar Dehthai Thai,
        Appki Katil Na Bane Iss Liyai Karthai Hai Hum Izhaar,
    Magar Yeh Jaan Loh App Kai Meri Dhoonya Mein Sirf Dard Hi Hai,
Meri Dhoonya Mein Koy Appna Nahin Hai, Akeli Si Hai Meri Chooti Si Yeh Dhoonya Jahan Sab Dard Hi Dehthai Hai, Ek Bar Appna Bananai Se Pehle Sooch Lehna, Kai Humko Paa Kai Shayad App Bhi Ho Na Jayai Meri Tarah Ghoom Ra......

Good advice abhi aisa karunga .... Thanks Thanks...

Yeh izhaar-e-muhabbat hai tera pahla qadam, -
Zakhm apnalunga tere ban ke unka main marham, -
Dard naa milega ab tujhe koi aaj se mere sanam, -
Basayenge ek naya chaman saath ek duje ka denge hum. -

(Syed Naami)
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«Reply #51 on: June 12, 2008, 10:48:07 PM »
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fabulous reply........

      Kar Lehthi Main Tujhe Pai Bharosa Agar Yeh Dhoonya Walai Na Hothai Ithnai Pathar Dil,
   Kar Lehthi Main Teri Baat Ka Yaqeen Agar Yeh Dhoonya Walai Humko Milne Dehthai,
     Magar Hai Yeh Dhoonya Walai Barai Pathar Dil, Nahin Milnai Dehgai Woh Humme, Har Khushi Cheen Leh Gai Woh Humare Angaan Se, Or Barh Deh Gai Usse Dard Se, Gosh Yeh Dhoonya Walai Ithnai Pathar Dil Na Hothai, Tho Shayad Hum Ek Ho Jathai.....
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«Reply #52 on: June 13, 2008, 10:40:50 AM »
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Amazing response... very heart breaking shock... Best one...


Tum saath deke jee chura rahe ho, -

Mere aitbaar ko thhukra rahe ho, -

Duniya se dar ke jee chura rahe ho, -

Pathar dil khud ko bana rahe ho, -

Maoqa dene se katra rahe ho, -

Izhaar karke inkaar kar rahe ho, -

Mere dard ko aur badha rahe ho, -

Bewafa ban ke kissi ko jala rahe ho, -

Meri Muhabbat ka mazaaq bana rahe ho, -

Deewana mujhe karke hans rahe ho, -

Konse gunaah ki saza de rahe ho, -

Pyar karke judai ke pathar mar rahe ho, -

Jao khush raho jahan bhi ja rahe ho, -

Qatal karke dil ka duniya walon ko dikha rahe ho. -


(Syed Naami)
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«Reply #53 on: June 13, 2008, 04:00:27 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 13, 2008, 10:40:50 AM
Amazing response... very heart breaking shock... Best one...


Tum saath deke jee chura rahe ho, -

Mere aitbaar ko thhukra rahe ho, -

Duniya se dar ke jee chura rahe ho, -

Pathar dil khud ko bana rahe ho, -

Maoqa dene se katra rahe ho, -

Izhaar karke inkaar kar rahe ho, -

Mere dard ko aur badha rahe ho, -

Bewafa ban ke kissi ko jala rahe ho, -

Meri Muhabbat ka mazaaq bana rahe ho, -

Deewana mujhe karke hans rahe ho, -

Konse gunaah ki saza de rahe ho, -

Pyar karke judai ke pathar mar rahe ho, -

Jao khush raho jahan bhi ja rahe ho, -

Qatal karke dil ka duniya walon ko dikha rahe ho. -


(Syed Naami)

      THanks soooooo much!!!!!!!!!

          Wow.......amazing reply........its sooooooo touching......im out of words........

Na Katil Humko Yuhn Banao,
Na Yuhn Humko Bewafa Kaho,
Na Humko Pathar Dil Yuhn Banao,
Hum Tho Terai Hai Or Terai Hi Rahein Gai,
Bas Dar Rahein Hai Inn DHoonya Walon Se,       
Jho Meri Har Khushi Koh Mujhse Cheen Thai Ayai Hai,
Dar Lagraha Hai Kahin Woh Appko Bhi Humare Khilaaf Na Kar Deh,
Pathar Dil Nahin Hoon Main, App Bhi Meri Tarah Inn Dhoonya Walon Kai Diyai Huai Dard Na Sahein Yahi Chaahthai Hu Mein,
Dhoor Chalein Jayai Ge Jab Hum Tho App Humko Bhoola Lehna,
Dhoor Chalein Jayai Ge Jab Hum Tho App Humse Nafraat Kar Lehna,
Na Yaad Karna Humko Kabhi, Na Karna Humse Pyar, Warna Yeh Dhoonya Walai Appko Bhi Meri Tarah Jenai Nahin Deh Gai,
Bas Yeh Jaan Loh, Kai Chaah Kar Bhi Kabhi Hum Appko Bhool Na Payaige, Chaahthi Rahoongi Mein Appko Jab Thak Chalein Gi Yeh Sansai Meri, Or Shayad Thab Bhi Jab Sooh Rahin Hoon Gi Appni Kabar Mein Main........
     
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«Reply #54 on: June 13, 2008, 06:11:27 PM »
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Uffff ... Yeh last line ... Toba... Sabah,,,
Your imaginations are awsome,,, you just thrilled me...
Great one...
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Pooja
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«Reply #55 on: June 13, 2008, 06:14:39 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Sami and Palkhi!!
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palkhi
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«Reply #56 on: June 13, 2008, 11:46:26 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 13, 2008, 06:11:27 PM
Uffff ... Yeh last line ... Toba... Sabah,,,
Your imaginations are awsome,,, you just thrilled me...
Great one...

       Awwwwww..thanks...........waiting for ur reply!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #57 on: June 13, 2008, 11:46:50 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 13, 2008, 06:14:39 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Sami and Palkhi!!

   Teinku sooooooooo much Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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syednaami
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«Reply #58 on: June 14, 2008, 11:12:48 AM »
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Milega Milega Jaldi Milega Reply...
Waise bhi iqraar inkaar ke beech jang khatam hogi kya?
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«Reply #59 on: June 14, 2008, 03:26:50 PM »
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Hehehehe.........true...........waiting.......... ...... tongue3
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