Khuwabon me bhi tanha...

by killbill on November 20, 2010, 03:05:01 PM
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zindagi ki raaho me to akele the,
woh to khabon me bhi tanha kar gaye..
chhuda kar haath hamara,
chor gaye saath hamara,
kisi or ko apna kar chale gaye..
uljhi hui manzil-e-zindaki ko,
woh to or uljha kar chale gaye..
ek umeed unse hi thi
kuch to saath nibhayega,
woh bhi ab na-umeed kar chale gaye..
kaha tha unko sooni ho jayegi zindagi unke bina,
woh to saare zazbato ko ansuna kar chale gaye..
nind na aati ab raako ko,
kuredte hai zazbato ko,
sahme sahme se rahte hai ab,
shayd tanha khabo se darte hai ab..
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2010, 10:31:55 PM »
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"Shayad tanha khwabon se darte hai ab.."
Kya baat hai yaar..
dil ki baat likh di apne..
Behad zada pasand ayi mujhe apki yeh peshkash..
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2010, 05:41:27 AM »
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shukriya Rahim bhai..
lekin ye adhura hi likh paaya mai..mobile me space hi nhi tha yaar:(
ab mai nai likunga kuch..sirf comnt karunga idhar bas.
Thanx Rahim Miya:Winking
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2010, 08:10:45 AM »
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killbill ji. badi intensity aur bebaaki se tanhaee aur rusvaaee ka izhaar kiya hai. khaas taur se akhiri line to bahaut dardnaak hai "shayad tanha khwabon se darte hain ab". bahaut acchhaa.

ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...

wo aake khwaab mein taskeen e iztiraab to de
wale mujhe tapish e dil majaal e khwaab to de
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2010, 06:08:26 PM »
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shukriya Zara ji..
lekin ye akhri lines nhi thi..
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2010, 06:52:52 AM »
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bahut khoob subash ji....

tanha khawabo se darte hai hum...

u writes so well...
pata nahi aapko likhne se itni problem kyu hai....

wasie pata nahi ye kahna chahiye ya nahi par
keep writing....
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2010, 06:59:51 AM »
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thanku Priya ji:)
par mai one tym likhta hu direct mobile pr..
or mobile lambi chij likhne nhi deta mera..
aadhe me hi stop krna pada tha..sad5
wese parhez nai likhne se mujhe..
aapka shukriya jo aapne pasand kiya Usual Smile
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