KOI...

by angel4u on June 22, 2006, 10:13:35 PM
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Meri Khamoshi Pe Gazal Likh Gaya Koi,
Mere Dil Ki Dhadkan Me Sama Gaya Koi,
Kaise Kahe Ab Unhe Ajnabi,
Meri Saanso Ko Chu Kar Mehka Gaya Koi,
Hum To Jiye Jaa Rahe The Besabab Zindagi,
Is Zindagi Me Jaan Daal Gaya Koi,
Saansein Lete The Bojh Ki Tarah
In Saansonko Khuda Ka Ehsaan Bana Gaya Koi,
Dhadkanoko Na Thi Apni Raftar Ki Khabar,
Dhadkanope Ki Raftaar Badha Gaya Koi,
Apne Wajud Par Tha Na Kabhi Darkaar Mujhe
Apna Keh kar Mujhe Gumaan Karna Sikha Gaya Koi,
Khwab Bhi To Aate Hte Numaish Ki Tarah
In Me Apne Nishan Chhod Gaya Koi,
Dil Ki Zamin Thi Banjar Bahut
Inme Pyar Ki Barish Kar Gaya Koi,
Rooh Thi Hamari Bejaan Si Besabab,
Rooh Ke Sath Apni Rooh Ko Mila Gaya Koi...
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2006, 04:35:05 AM »
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masha allaha...............kya likha hai nice words..............
aur kuch sabad wakai mein achai hai aap ke............
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2006, 02:25:41 AM »
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Thanks naveen ji. Ek aap hi ho jisne is post ko padhke reply kiya sad5
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2006, 02:40:22 AM »
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Meri Khamoshi Pe Gazal Likh Gaya Koi,
Mere Dil Ki Dhadkan Me Sama Gaya Koi,
Kaise Kahe Ab Unhe Ajnabi,
Meri Saanso Ko Chu Kar Mehka Gaya Koi,
Hum To Jiye Jaa Rahe The Besabab Zindagi,
Is Zindagi Me Jaan Daal Gaya Koi,
Saansein Lete The Bojh Ki Tarah
In Saansonko Khuda Ka Ehsaan Bana Gaya Koi,
Dhadkanoko Na Thi Apni Raftar Ki Khabar,
Dhadkanope Ki Raftaar Badha Gaya Koi,
Apne Wajud Par Tha Na Kabhi Darkaar Mujhe
Apna Keh kar Mujhe Gumaan Karna Sikha Gaya Koi,
Khwab Bhi To Aate Hte Numaish Ki Tarah
In Me Apne Nishan Chhod Gaya Koi,
Dil Ki Zamin Thi Banjar Bahut
Inme Pyar Ki Barish Kar Gaya Koi,
Rooh Thi Hamari Bejaan Si Besabab,
Rooh Ke Sath Apni Rooh Ko Mila Gaya Koi...


Gr8 Angel......

Sunke teri baatein behti hawa me Zulfein lehra gaya koi......
Thamti Zindagi ko aaj phir Besabri ka Aanchal pehna gaya koi......

Ruke Ruke se kadam hua karte the......
Par aaj haath thaam ke rasta paar kara gaya koi.....!!!!!!!!
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2006, 02:44:25 AM »
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Nice gaurav...

Raasta to dikha diya kisine
Par aaj usi raaste pe mujhe tanha chhod gaya koi

Kehte the jo tere saye ke sath chalenge
Aaj mera saya hi chura le gaya koi...
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2006, 10:32:30 PM »
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Meri Khamoshi Pe Gazal Likh Gaya Koi,
Mere Dil Ki Dhadkan Me Sama Gaya Koi,
Kaise Kahe Ab Unhe Ajnabi,
Meri Saanso Ko Chu Kar Mehka Gaya Koi,
Hum To Jiye Jaa Rahe The Besabab Zindagi,
Is Zindagi Me Jaan Daal Gaya Koi,
Saansein Lete The Bojh Ki Tarah
In Saansonko Khuda Ka Ehsaan Bana Gaya Koi,
Dhadkanoko Na Thi Apni Raftar Ki Khabar,
Dhadkanope Ki Raftaar Badha Gaya Koi,
Apne Wajud Par Tha Na Kabhi Darkaar Mujhe
Apna Keh kar Mujhe Gumaan Karna Sikha Gaya Koi,
Khwab Bhi To Aate Hte Numaish Ki Tarah
In Me Apne Nishan Chhod Gaya Koi,
Dil Ki Zamin Thi Banjar Bahut
Inme Pyar Ki Barish Kar Gaya Koi,
Rooh Thi Hamari Bejaan Si Besabab,
Rooh Ke Sath Apni Rooh Ko Mila Gaya Koi...


Wah Bahut Achcha Likhte ho.....
Its not in order.  Thode lines . Rooh, Saanson, Dhadkan, Wajud....
Ek line main rahe to aur bhi Kasshish, Junoon....
Rahtha aapke ees shahiry main.
Wakhi main aap ne bahut heee achcha likha hai..

Nads.
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2006, 10:14:24 AM »
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Thanks Dardhai, aage se koshish karungi dear..
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