mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

by premdeep on June 06, 2013, 07:44:52 PM

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mere hasti me hai bik jana
kabhi jeena kabhi mar jana

pyaar hai andha to kya hua
adaat me hai meri gir jana

Hai sabhi ke liye koi na koi
haath apne bas khali paimana

milna nahi kismat me uski
bas jalta hi raha parwana

mahlon me hai unka thikana
apna to hai bas mehkhana

dard hai badal sa ab to
jab chahe tab baras jana

darpan se jhankta hai aksar
apna hi aks nikla beegana

khayalon me rooj hai ata
pyara sa chehra anjaana

pyaar ki talash me darbadar
kyu firta raha me deewaana


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2013, 08:12:44 PM »

bahut khoob. dheron daad.


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2013, 08:58:22 PM »

Bhai Bahut Khoob.


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2013, 10:44:05 PM »

Quote from: premdeep on June 06, 2013, 07:44:52 PM

mere hasti me hai bik jana
kabhi jeena kabhi mar jana

pyaar hai andha to kya hua
adaat me hai meri gir jana

Hai sabhi ke liye koi na koi
haath apne bas khali paimana

milna nahi kismat me uski
bas jalta hi raha parwana

mahlon me hai unka thikana
apna to hai bas mehkhana

dard hai badal sa ab to
jab chahe tab baras jana

darpan se jhankta hai aksar
apna hi aks nikla beegana

khayalon me rooz hai ata
pyara sa chehra anjaana

pyaar ki talash me darbadar
kyu phirta raha me deewaana

with rau gr888888888888888888888888,sir


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2013, 12:05:30 AM »

waah waah waaaaaaaah, bahut hi khoob Premdeep jee, kaafi achha likha hai, meri dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareiN.


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2013, 03:07:56 AM »

Bahut khoob..................
Clapping Smiley


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jasbirsingh

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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2013, 08:24:13 AM »

wah wah wah ... bahut bahut hi khooob jiiii

jasbir singh


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2013, 02:49:19 PM »

waah bahut khoob premdeep ji.. Applause


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premdeep

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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2013, 05:13:27 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on June 06, 2013, 08:12:44 PM

bahut khoob. dheron daad.

thanks aqshji


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premdeep

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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2013, 05:15:50 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 06, 2013, 10:44:05 PM

with rau gr888888888888888888888888,sir

correction aur hausala afzai ke liye bahut sukriya sir


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2013, 05:16:46 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 07, 2013, 12:05:30 AM

waah waah waaaaaaaah, bahut hi khoob Premdeep jee, kaafi achha likha hai, meri dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareiN.

thanks iftakhar ji


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Re: mere hasti me hai bik jana....premdeep

«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2013, 12:20:19 PM »

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