MERE LABO SE MERI..........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 18, 2008, 06:53:53 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 25, 2008, 04:40:53 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 23, 2008, 05:27:16 PM
Nice Ghayel Ji

Thank u Rajesh

Quote from: dead heart on December 24, 2008, 08:25:14 PM
wah wah wah wah...koi lavz nahin mil raha hai jisse apki tarif kar sakun...bahaut hi khoob likha hai...har lavz main ek gheri soch hai jisse bahaut khoobsoorati se bayan kia hai apne...bahaut din bad kuch dil ko choo gaya....dil main uttar gaya...

mujse woh mere ansu mang rahe hai,
sahara deti hui meri rooh mang rahe hai...

dil ko mardia unki bewaffai ne,
nilami karne ke liye humari kabar mang rahe hai...

likha karte the hum unki shaan main aaj bewaffai pe likh rahe hai,
aaj dekho humse humara kalam mang rahe hai...


Bohat shukriyaa DH itni izzat dene ke liye jab tum jaisi dad koi deta hain to shayer ki umar badh jati hain & equally beautiful reply by you  Applause

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 24, 2008, 09:50:39 PM
Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai shaayad pasand aaye

Khusiyaan tu luta do unke liye
Hansi bhi tu luta do unke liye

Agar woh hai such hi teri zindagi
To de do use apni saari zindagi

Chord kar chale gaye ho unhe tanha
To de do unko apne kabr mein panha

Kyon ho gaye itne mein to bezubaan
Kuch to unka haq hai de do usko maan


Bohat khoob Rajesh  Applause
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«Reply #16 on: December 25, 2008, 04:48:26 AM »
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jiss khoobsoorati se apne likha tha usse toh apka haq banta hai ke apko dad dee jae...aur khushi hui ke apko pasand aya...
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